[story] the world is no longer green

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author: REI (rei_kurasaki)
email: ravenberg_shien [at] hotmail.com

Comments

[letterbugg]

This piece is so quiet and demure and sedate, making the reader face the wisdom of the old ones, watching it all play out. Like a calligraphy painting on a scroll silently coming to life. I loved this, thank you.

[wordsofastory]

This is a really lovely story. I love the details of it; the creatures, the sights, and the sounds. It feels so evocative, so real. I love the ending too, because in a way it's what's been coming all along, and yet it was stills surprising. Awesome, excellent job. I love this.

[ophelietta]

eerie and wonderful. you have the uncanny ability to pack so much meaning into so few words; the spaces, the breaths in between, seem to hold so much. i love how the characters have the feel of elemental creatures who live outside of human "morals". beautiful story.

[lady_ganesh]

The forest has rules and claws that the humans know little off, and they remember less and less as the years slip by. Nice.

[threewalls]

I like how concise this story is, in its sections and its prose, while still having a broad cast of characters.