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[story] the silent city

Sep 30, 2007 02:51

author: tari gwaemir (tarigwaemir)
email: tarigwaemir [at] gmail.com

( They arrived on the outskirts of the town at dawn, as the red sunlight filtered through the dusty haze that covered the flat plains. )

author: tari gwaemir, story, book 05: ghost story

Comments 7

rei_kurasaki September 30 2007, 13:35:03 UTC

♥!

letterbugg October 1 2007, 08:24:38 UTC

I like the way everything is just right in this story. It's charming and elegant, but reserved and not flashy. It's simple but leaves a mark on the reader.

sub_divided October 1 2007, 20:30:08 UTC

Gah, I love your description. And I love how nothing's explained. It's a beautiful story.

issen4 October 3 2007, 04:39:50 UTC

Ooh. This is really nice! What do you mean, it was hurried? No sign of that at all. Lovely and haunting.

serendip October 3 2007, 17:06:42 UTC

Good job, dude XD This is a ghost story I like XDDDD I am normally a wuss, so.