"Okay, Mister," I whisper, and if blood still ran through my veins, my face would be as scarlet as the morning sky. "This is gay as hell, but your kid needs you." *giggles* This is cute and funny and also very sweet. Love it.
A really nice story. I like that you wrote from the perspective of the ghost, instead of the living, and that it's such a hopeful story. Your narrator has a very fun, distinctive voice, and I enjoyed reading about him a great deal. Good job!
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*giggles* This is cute and funny and also very sweet. Love it.
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