[story] the haunting of the hell house on the hill

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author: hazard_us (hazard_us)
email: scorpio_kaur [at] yahoo.com

Comments

[chrysan]

Maybe that's all the house wanted - a little reassurance that they weren't going to paint it pink with polka dots. They'd tried to keep the renovations slow and easy, but it was a very old and skittish building.

Very very cool. And the above was my fav. part. And the squirt bottles made me go LOL endlessly.

This is one very tough family indeed. XDXDXDXD

[hazard_us]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[letterbugg]

This is hilarious. I loved everything about this story, from the title right down to the missing opposable thumbs and even the end where it goes the end.

[hazard_us]

I was tempted to do "the end...or is it?" but it really was the end. ^_^ No use building up suspense.

[letterbugg]

I think you ended it at just the right length for this story, which just adds to its appeal. Alhough anyone would be sad to see the finis of a good story, but that is where we scroll up again. =)

[arrghigiveup]

Hahaaa... I love the descriptions of the "old and skittish building", and that is one cool family. Lovely story.

[hazard_us]

Thanks!

[sub_divided]

XD. Great opening, the whole thing is hilarious.

[hazard_us]

Thank you!

[wordsofastory]

Hahaha! God, what an awesome story. I love the idea of a family learning to control their haunted house. You're also really good at including genuinely creepy details (Faceless Twins? Agh!), while still being very funny. I loved reading this.

[hazard_us]

I'm glad you found it funny! There *had* to be twins though (see also The Shining).