[story] school of seven wonders

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author: meg (lazulisong)
email: lazulisong [at] gmail.com

Comments

[sakurazuka_jae]

Oh WOW. This just. I am. No words. Can't.

*brain melts down from the wonderful awesome lyrical magic of this fic*

[white_aster]

Holy crap, that was awesome. The little ficlet format works really well for giving it atmosphere, so it's about the school, rather than about the characters.

Tanuki-san! ^____^

[still_ciircee]

Don't mind me, I'm just going to flail like a fangirl now. I love the repetitions and how everything is just 'a little' and how there is never a name or a location given because then it could be anywhere. A little bit of magic anywhere. My favorites are The Shadow of the Jilted Fox and Mr. Tanuki. I ♥ you. Your creativity--and the expert way you express it--never fails to leave me stunned.

[wordsofastory]

Oh, excellent. I really like the tone of these stories, and the ways they fit together. Very good job.

[sub_divided]

You write so pretty. *_* I love how some of these are harmless and some are dangerous. My favorites are #1 and #5.

She likes to sit on the old benches at night and combs her long hair.

Wrong tense. ^^;

[cynic_in_charge]

Oh hell. And two people checked it too after I edited it. XDXDXD

[sub_divided]

I am an editing machine.

(The other thing I thought was that

And some students would obey, and others wouldn't. They'd see a perfectly ordinary classroom

would work better without "and others wouldn't" since the they in the second sentence only refers to the students who would obey. )

To meg: <333

[lazulisong]

I was refering to the kids who weren't actually going into the classroom but WERE looking in with that bit? Maybe I wasn't clear.