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[story] natural selection

Jan 31, 2007 00:34

author: jaz templet (yachiru)
email: yachiru [at] gmail.com

( They find him in the kitchen, surrounded by the bones. )

book 01: imaginary beasts, author: jaz templet, story

Comments 5

wordsofastory February 2 2007, 02:37:54 UTC

Creepy! But still a very good story.

animeartistjo February 2 2007, 05:21:57 UTC

This is the stuff of nightmares and trauma. Dude, if those big-name producers and directors want horror movie scripts. This is IT. This is way, way, WAY freakier than any of those chainsaw movies.

woodburner February 3 2007, 00:41:18 UTC

Awesome.

kiyoshi_chan February 3 2007, 05:15:24 UTC

Oh wow, that was... super super creepy. And also the bit about his first wife was sudden and unexpected. (And painful.)

Trust me, the above statements were complimentary. ;) I couldn't stop reading because I totally wanted to know what you had to tell us about Gary.

still_ciircee February 6 2007, 17:54:20 UTC

I love how you give us a view of how Gary has changed--from the man he was with his first wife, to the bastard he is when he leaves Shannon and Kelly, to the mostly-monster wondering if he'll come back in the sequel. Also, his transfomation is creepy--the way he feels it and sees it but nobody else does. That's awesome.