this was really nice. i liked how it came kind of full-circle and i really liked the part with the man telling eric how it wasn't the machine malfunctioining. it was him. awesome stuff.
Oh, very nice story. I really like the worldbuilding that's in this story; the contrast between Mitsui and the Outside is so cool, and I like the cyborgs and ruined churches. All really cool.
This is creepy, depressing, and sucked me right in anyway. I'd really like to know more about the future it's set in, and how things wound up that way.
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this was really nice. i liked how it came kind of full-circle and i really liked the part with the man telling eric how it wasn't the machine malfunctioining. it was him. awesome stuff.
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