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Prompt # 17 - Glorious

Jul 11, 2010 09:11

Title: Your Body Above Me
Prompt: #17 - Glorious
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Shosanna Dreyfus/Fredrick Zoller
Rating: PG-13
A/N: I know the community's not been active since April, but writer's block had gotten ahold of me and I needed to jumpstart my brain.
Disclaimer: Not mine. But oh, if only.

( He is rendered entirely senseless by her )

rating: pg-13, prompt #17: glorious, character: fredrick zoller, character: shoshanna dreyfus

Comments 6

la_belle_ange July 11 2010, 15:27:18 UTC

Lovely.

♥ ♥ ♥

suspiriorum July 11 2010, 22:22:12 UTC

Thank you, my dear!

It took me enough time, but I've finally gotten my inspiration back.

And of course, it's because of you and others that I keep writing ♥

la_belle_ange July 11 2010, 22:25:56 UTC

I'm glad your inspiration has returned!!

I have several of your fics saved to my comp because they take my breath away. ♥

suspiriorum July 11 2010, 23:21:13 UTC

Thank you! I was in a bit of a rut and though I hadn't lost my focus on my personal project, I was frustrated with how I couldn't get myself to cooperate with Shosanna and Fredrick. Though yes, to many it's just fan fic, but it's because of those two that I got back into writing, I owe it to them to finish what I had started.

Oh, goodness. That absolutely means more to me than I can articulate! Thank you so, so very much ♥

nickytheapache July 12 2010, 03:59:26 UTC

OMG! ♥

Very glad to hear you've had a break-through with the writer's block. This was a very lovely appetizer before the next part of KFAD!
Beautifully and poetically written - subtle, but great imagery.
I love it!

Perfect ending line, too.

suspiriorum July 12 2010, 04:57:28 UTC

It took me four hours to write it, which sort of amuses me. However, it came out the way I wanted and it gave my brain a jumpstart.

I had written up the last two lines first, actually, but I wasn't certain of where to place them. I initially had them as the opening, but they definitely serve the mood and plot best by wrapping it up.

Oh, most definitely, it's an appetizer before part 7 of KFAD. I have quite a bit of it written already (nearly 6,000 words so far), and there's still more left to be written. But now, I have a better sense of direction for it.

Thank you so much! Your feedback and enthusiasm is always appreciated ♥