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ihateswine January 22 2009, 08:59:57 UTC
punctuation goes after citation (like this).

explain what you mean by different view on compassion. you have quotes but no explanation.

you're off to a good start with these. I'd like to see the final drafts when you are all done with this series.

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iao131 January 22 2009, 14:40:20 UTC
93,

Thanks teacher... ?

IAO131

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ihateswine January 22 2009, 14:43:03 UTC
you get an A for effort

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iao131 January 23 2009, 02:36:06 UTC
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Much appreciated, O merciful one.

IAO131

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frater_mythos January 31 2009, 10:59:32 UTC
I must say, I'm looking for your work to be published in hard Cover editions.. I have already forwarded your assesments to friends and family.
all of whom (I might say) are becoming true fans indeed.
Carry on brother, Carry on.

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iao131 January 31 2009, 18:52:28 UTC
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Much appreciated brother. Im glad some people enjoy these writings.

IAO131

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