Sometimes He Comes Back (4/4)

[iantojjackh]

Title: Sometimes He Comes Back (4/4)
Author: iantojjackh
Summary: Ianto looked over at the man with a pinstripe suit and trainers, noting it was an odd fashion choice 
Characters: Ianto, Jack, Martha and the Doctor (Ten)
Warnings: None 
Spoilers: CoE. This takes place right after Day 5? It's an AU CoE fix-it
Word Count: 1491
Beta: badly_knitted. You were a life saver with this

Comments

[classics_lover]

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

The Doctor *is* right that the Void is too dangerous to open for Ianto's memories, but boo! *pouts*

Hopefully during their thousands of years Ianto again encounters the Void and gets his memories back.

BTW, you seem to be missing a little bit at this point:Martha ran after the Doctor, upset that he was so flippant with Jack and

[iantojjackh]

Thank you.

Yeah and they lived happily ever after litterally.

The problem with the void is that Ianto's memories will reset to last time the void opened. So any extended time he would lose years again

Fixed it. In my formatting a word must have gotten erased.

[lilferret]

That asshat! The Doctor, I mean. But yeah, I suppose forever is enough time for new memories.

[iantojjackh]

Thanks.

Yup he is an asshat. Just imagine all the shenanigans the boys cold have gotten into together spending a thousand years together.

[badly_knitted]

Ooooh! What a gorgeous ending! A thousand years and they still act like newlyweds =) May they be just as happy for the next few billion years!

If the Doctor suggests for a second that they were not meant to be, I'll dump him in a vat of decaf and make him drink the lot! For a long-lived and supposedly intelligent time-and-space travelling alien, he's remarkably intolerant, not to mention blind to what is right in front of him. It's his fault Jack is immortal in the first place - he neither asked for it nor wanted it, yet the Doctor always acts like it's Jack's fault. Grrrr!

[iantojjackh]

Thank you. Glad you loved the ending. I think they will probably act this way to the end of time. I think they might have given the other couple a heart attack if they heard they had been together for a thousand years.

Yeah. I never liked the way the Doctor treated Jack. I hope I got his voice right. It's been a while since I've watched any episodes with the tenth incarnation in it. At least the boys were together.

Thanks again for all your help with this one

[badly_knitted]

It was my pleasure!

I liked Ten most of the time, just not where Jack was involved or in the last few specials, where he becaome less than heroic. That said, I adore Eleven, he's bought back the fun that seemed to disappear towards the end of Tennant's era.

I think Ten is very hard to write, but you did a good job - not sure I'd like to try writing him myself! He can be so offhand, blunt and completely tactless, then turn into some hyper, manically grinning lunatic. It gives me mental whiplash at times, lol!

[milady_dragon]

Just read all four parts, and this was great! What a fantastic use of all the prompts.

And yeah, that Doctor...what an arsehole.

[iantojjackh]

Thank you very much.

Yeah he was a complete arse to Jack and Ianto, but they still got their happy ending.

[aviv_b]

Yay! You know that a million years a Janto means at least a million stories you now have to write, LOL.

[iantojjackh]

Thank you.

A million more stories? Ha if I had the time. Imagine the alien species they can teach about their shenanigans.