Straight Lines And Curve Balls, 11/15

Dec 05, 2011 22:54

Title: Straight Lines and Curve Balls - Chapter 11
Fandom: NCIS
Beta: Unbetaed. But I proofread obsessively, if that helps?
Rating: R
Genre: Slash, humour, a little light angst
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Disclaimer: I don't own any of them, more's the pity. If I did I'd share...
Description: In which Abby happens.
Warnings: None

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ferneberga December 6 2011, 11:47:59 UTC
Just loved the Pride and Prejudice comparison :)))

Tony is pure danger when he's on meds, his tongue and brain just run away with themselves :)

Looking forward to next update

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iantalia December 7 2011, 21:18:32 UTC
Thank you! At least Tony had the sense not to take the meds. Although then again, maybe it would have been better if he had...

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firesign10 December 6 2011, 13:27:59 UTC
Great chapter!!!

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iantalia December 7 2011, 21:18:40 UTC
Thank you!

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tonysmel December 6 2011, 21:13:21 UTC
Love the thought of Gibbs as Mr Darcy, and I'm wondering now if Abby "knows". And the brief moment, when Tony asks Abby if she really expects Gibbs to remember that the blind-date-woman loves yellow roses, and Gibbs cocks his head,looks at Tony, and the two share a smile, made me almost hopeful that something was clicking there. But alas, then Gibbs beat a hasty retreat to the basement. This is not going to be easy...

As always, splendidly amusing. Thanks!

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iantalia December 7 2011, 21:19:53 UTC
Thank you! I love an on the ball audience, you know - I can tell you're paying attention!

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laura_trekkie December 8 2011, 22:41:33 UTC
Heee. Poor Tony, saying that last bit out loud. Maybe he can blame the painkillers. Though Gibbs didn't seem to mind the comment, so maybe it was just what they needed to get the ball rolling between them...

Laura.

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iantalia December 9 2011, 22:17:37 UTC
We shall see...

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ayankha December 17 2011, 16:55:39 UTC
just stumbled along and absolutley loving this fic... can't wait for more!

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iantalia December 19 2011, 22:30:42 UTC
Thank you! Beavering away on a rewrite of 12 at the moment!

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