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xbeax August 29 2008, 06:56:26 UTC
:D

New fic w00t~!!

I was about to go to sleep but now I have to read this~!!! I'll be back later with a better comment after I finish reading this. :D

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xbeax August 29 2008, 07:36:51 UTC
Ok, I'm back now. :D

Wow, this fic was awesome, I love how it was full of misunderstandings from all sides! Ryan and Brendon ansgting over each other, Jon trying to woo Spencer and poor Spencer and his misunderstandings! (Spencer amused me xD Poor guy haha)

And PETE!!! I sooo thought he was really with Ryan when I was reading the first part but omg!! I love how he considers Ryan like the Gay Guru or whatever, the person to talk to about his gay-ness hahaa. (And w00t for him realizing he was gay for Pattycakes LOL)

Totally loved this!! *mems it*

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iamtheenemy_fic September 2 2008, 21:48:47 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad it was worth the read for you! Yeah, Spencer was pretty much my favorite part of the story too. So misinformed.

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allyndra August 29 2008, 07:20:33 UTC
Wow, that was great! You did an amazing job with the various POVs. The misunderstandings and motivations were really plausible, and I'm so glad there was no "villain." The interactions among the band were entertaining and touching and aggravating, by turns, and the resolution was very satisfying. The epilogue had me giggling.

Thanks for sharing!

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iamtheenemy_fic September 2 2008, 21:50:00 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad it was worth the read for you! I'm glad that you thought the misunderstandings were plausible, because I worked really hard on making them realistic even though they were so silly.

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darksylvia August 29 2008, 07:24:44 UTC
THIS IS AWESOME. OMG. All this delicious misunderstanding-angst! I love it! Brendon and Ryan being SO GONE for each other. And I totally wondered if you were leading up to anything with Brendon announcing how awesome Jon was every time Jon was awesome. Because it was totally natural and yet totally a pattern, too.

I love this SO MUCH.

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iamtheenemy_fic September 2 2008, 21:51:01 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad it was worth the read for you! I'm glad that you didn't guess what the Jon and Brendon stuff was leading up to right away. I tried to make it obvious that they were friends, but not what Spencer thought.

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milenaa August 29 2008, 07:27:15 UTC
I love this! It's just the right mix of funny and angsty :)

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iamtheenemy_fic September 2 2008, 21:51:19 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

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inawonderland August 29 2008, 07:33:17 UTC
This was so fantastic. I love your characterizations and the disjointed timeline that fit togetherso perfectly by the end. ♥!

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iamtheenemy_fic September 2 2008, 21:51:35 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Glad you thought the timeline all made sense in the end.

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inawonderland September 3 2008, 02:14:06 UTC
You're welcome. I'm pretty sure that I'll re-read this again because it's that great. ♥

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