Comments | iamtheenemy_fic: Lines in the Sand, B/R, S/J [2/2]

iamtheenemy_fic

Lines in the Sand, B/R, S/J [2/2]

Nov 03, 2007 00:43

panic, au, spencer/jon, sand-verse, rating: r, bandom, ryan/brendon

Comments 236

provetheworst November 3 2007, 06:50:30 UTC

this is pretty precious! ahaha, jon won. ♥ and ryan is dumb. and. brendon is a preciousface. and ahahaha aw, ryan, christmas present, what.

sorry it's really late and i'm incoherent today anyway soooo D: just know that i liked this okay and if i could be more articulate i would

iamtheenemy November 6 2007, 00:51:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it! And yes, Ryan is dumb! :)

disarm_d November 3 2007, 07:01:36 UTC

Oh my god, the build in this was just amazing! I friggen loved this!

Spencer and Jon were amaaaaaaaaaazing. I love Jon defending Spencer's honour, and how they are like GETTING STRANGLED TO DEATH BY KITTENS. That was amazing.

And Ryan and Brendon? Ohhhhh, BOYS. My heart. My heart. The progression of their relationship was just perfect.

Seriously, totally awesome. <3

iamtheenemy November 6 2007, 00:52:32 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked the build up of the story, because I was honestly a little worried that it didn't flow right. <3

wistfuljane November 3 2007, 07:13:33 UTC

I think one of the things I love about this fic is Jon & Spencer's months of foreplay - and I love Brendon and Ryan's months of not dating too.

iamtheenemy November 6 2007, 00:53:31 UTC

Thanks so much! And yes, both of those couples brought NOT having sex to an artful.

jocondite November 3 2007, 07:29:30 UTC

Oh my god, my heart just exploded. I have so, so, so much love for this, I can't even. I love your Ryan, and your Jon and Spencer and their protracted mating dance, and just - *hands*- everything. SOUP, jesus. This is really horribly useless feedback, I'm so sorry, but I'm sitting here with this huge grin and while I was reading this I was making high-pitched little noises audible only to dogs, so hopefully that gets across how sincerely I adore this?

iamtheenemy_fic November 6 2007, 00:55:24 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. And dude, how could I not include SOUP after hearing that story about him. I mean, so precious!

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iamtheenemy_fic November 6 2007, 00:56:28 UTC

Parachute pants FTW! hee! Thanks so much for commenting. And yes, Spencer and Jon were definitely making cow eyes, like, constantly. Plus, Vicky-T is just made of win.