Harry Potter: Severus/Draco

[iamisaac]

Written For: daily_deviant Farewell FQ Fest
Prompt: 24. Severus/Draco - set after they run from Hogwarts, dark mood, on the run, isolated. Severus brooding and with a nasty tongue, demands Draco shows his gratitude for S saving his arse on the Astronomy Tower. Draco on his knees sucking S off, genital bondage, D being forced to masturbate while bound. No non-

Comments

[pesha]

I'm really not that into D/s scenarios as a matter of course, but you made this work really well. Snape has this tendency to really own a scene and the fact that all I could focus on was Draco and his slow, subtle humiliation is a testament to your writing ability. It's captivating.

[iamisaac]

I haven't written that many D/s, so I was a bit nervous (especially as it was half in the present tense) so I'm especially grateful that it worked. And I know what you mean about Severus. He's not easy to ignore...

[versipellis]

*shivers* Very IC for both - loved Snape's attitude at the end. Poor Draco *snuggles him*

[iamisaac]

Well, poor Draco, but also, this is a happy-ever-after type fic, in its own strange way :)

[cyranothe2nd]

Oh, how I luv your dirty dirty mind!!! That was wonderful and you captured the D/s element very well- the tension between pleasure and the shame you feel from gaining pleasure from something the world tell you is wrong and abusive...Its a hard line to toe and you capture it beautifully here. Loved the last bit. D/s is all about trust, and so many fanfic writers ignore that element for the kink. Glad to know some ppl get it.

[iamisaac]

the tension between pleasure and the shame you feel from gaining pleasure from something the world tell you is wrong

In the interests of too much information, I find this quite an easy tension to imagine. I would have had a lot more difficulty, I think, trying to write this from Severus's point of view. But you're right, D/s can be wonderful when it's between two people who care about each other and trust each other. And I wanted that to SHOW.

[elfflame]

I have several muses in my head staring in awe right now...That was incredibly gorgeous. The little details in this are so perfect. Draco's shame at being naked and masturbating, not wanting to let go of his pride... I could have read fifty pages of this, and I still could have read more. I loved it.

[iamisaac]

I'm glad :)

Mmm, Draco is made for scenes like this, I think. He makes such a lovely sub.

[elfflame]

He is. His father trained him well, whether he meant to or not. ;D