Comments | iamisaac: Harry Potter: Lucius/Sirius

iamisaac

Harry Potter: Lucius/Sirius

Jul 25, 2007 15:47

Written For: reversathon
Request: Some Lucius/Sirius dub-con, possibly hate-sex with background Lucius/Snape. Taking place after Snape and Sirius have left school, but not before Azkaban?
Rating: NC17
Word Count: ~2500
Author’s Note: Acknowledgements to my very brilliant beta, versipellis.

( Coming Home with Lucius )

nc17, lucius/sirius, harry potter, slash

Comments 5

versipellis July 25 2007, 18:40:44 UTC

You're welcome. It's still very good - the ending is well-paced and you can feel Sirius's, erm, stress.

"how much he had wanted him" - missing space between 'he' and 'had'.

iamisaac July 28 2007, 10:53:40 UTC

Thank you. Hmm, I just re-read it and it's better than I remembered, which is always a nice feeling. (Usually I re-read and think "oh bugger, it's useless...")

versipellis July 28 2007, 12:27:37 UTC

Oh, that is a nice feeling, I'm glad :D

lycoris July 25 2007, 21:16:06 UTC

Oh, I like that! I have a huge love for Lucius/Sirius and this was particually wonderful. Lucius was at his best charming, cold brilliant self and Sirius was wonderfully stressed and self-destructive and his choice at the end is brilliantly done. Just wonderful.

iamisaac July 28 2007, 10:54:21 UTC

YES, Lucius/Sirius is wonderful. It's one of my fave pairings at the moment, I think. And I'm glad it worked and that the characters acted in satisfying AND IC ways. Yay.