Harry Potter

[iamisaac]

Harry Potter
Severus/Harry; one-sided Severus/James
R
850ish words
slightly dub-con

Comments

[versipellis]

Oooh. The second-person format works really well here. And all the different conflicting loyalties and feelings Snape has come across very strongly, and the way they all fit together. I also like the way you show him trying not to actually make a move on Harry.

[iamisaac]

It was a bit of a test to try writing in the 'you' format. But I'm reasonably pleased by the way it came out.

Thank you :)