...FIVE HEROES DEAD, four lame excuses, three hours of sleep, two apologies, and an anecdote before the story!
I have been uncharacteristically good to characters and fandom alike lately, haven't I? What's with that, hmm?
Title: Fallout and Farewell
Fandom: Havemercy
Wordcount: 738
Summary: In the end, everything just freezes.
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baby, it's cold outside )
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will get back to you in the morning.
...augh.
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THAT FUCKING HURT. AUGH. ...my poor heart really can't take that strain.
Natalia, the love of his life, the only girl for him - a pile of debris herself now.
I ALMOST FUCKING CRIED AT THAT, DAMN YOU. Which just shows how well you illustrated the bond between rider and dragon. And plus, you know, DRAGON IN A HEAP? NOT FUCKING ON.
his long slender fingers are mangled, broken, and bloody
BRB WINCING FOREVER.
"Raphael," Ivory says, voice low and ragged and full of unexpected iron, "shut up."
My throat caught at that, truly it did. ASDFJHGDFGDKCBSHG IVORY. Guh. Why are you so awesome? STOP IT.
and and and "I just wanted to say, we made miracles," Raphael persists, desperate now. "And I am personally honoured to have had the fortune to fight by your side."
Oh, Raphael. ♥ You fucking Cindy. Goddammit, stop having emotions, you stupid bastard. Stop being touching. Fuck. Fuck. Fuckitty FUCK. GO DIE IN A F--WAIT.
...I still hate you. XD;
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But hey, I didn't come up with the situation. Blame Jaida and Dani. I just wrote it. I'm not happy about dragons in heaps either.
I wanted to write a sequel where they actually survive, and return to Thremedon, and Ivory can't play piano anymore because his fingers healed badly. I still might.
:D Ivory is fun~
So is Raphael, actually. HE'S SUCH A CINDY, HOLY FUCK. Natalia "deigns to let him hop on every now and again" or something equally cindy.
You know you love it~
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I have to go be emo now.
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There's a corner over there, clean and well-stocked with tissues. Popular demand, ah - demanded it. I write sadfic a lot.
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this was great. raphael really was quite 'cindy' in this, but in his raphael way, and i <3 him.
ALSO, YOUR SOCIOPATH!IVORY INTERPRETATION HAS TAKEN OVER MY BRAIN, JSYK.
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I'll write more! I really like these two now,
so obviously your ship is contagious.
TOGETHER, WE SHALL INFECT ALL OF FANDOM.
Thank you! Well, Raphael is rather cindy in canon. I kept referring back to the Airman scenes to make sure I wasn't too OOC, and well - I wasn't.
AHAHA, YOU KNOW IT'S TRUE. It just makes so much sense! Plus, it's extremely appealing. Quiet character is actually cracked and violent? You know you love it.
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and omg, raphael really, really is. in canon and here both, it is the same raphael, my raphael. *pets* especially his attempted declaration near the end, he totally fucking would say something like that, wouldn't he?
i am friending you so i can keep up with your fics. okay? hokay. :DDD
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Yes, so much so. Ever the man of many flowery words, our Raphael. Whereas Ivory is rather antisocial, perhaps shy, and would not.
Go for it! I love new friends~
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SDJFKSDJFKSJEF. ;3; oh Raphael
*shakes you*
WRITE SOMETHING HAPPY GODDAMNIT.
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UM UM I'LL TRY BUT I'LL WARN YOU, IT AIN'T IN MY NATURE.
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I'M SURE IT'LL BE WONDERFUL AND YOU'LL HAVE WORRIED FOR NOTHING.
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I know, late comment is late (waaayyyy~ late) but I only finished the book a week ago and am now in the process of fantarding my way through the fandom and
;_;
This story is made of so much win and love and heartbreak PERFECTNESS that I actually don't really know what to say. Just.
;_;
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But I'm really pleased you like this story. Raphael and Ivory are sort of my pet Airmen, because Rook and Adamo and Balfour and Luvander get all the love, but the others sort of don't. Someone's gotta tell the tragic story of the untimely demise of everyone else.
Thanks!
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