not what I planned at all

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So, last fic had been intended as a oneshot, but then Kurogane demanded a say in the matter. So here's his side of the matter, inspired by the same song and therefore still dedicated to

Comments

[fengtianshi]

Yay for Kuro pov! You pictured it perfectly!
Love love love to the fic! <3

[iambickilometer]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :D

[l0t0phage]

;___; my poor poor poor poor Kuro-puu...

You indeed pictured his feelings so greatly...

Even more beautiful than Fye's POV, but maybe I'm just biased heh ^^

Yes well, just gorgeous... <3

[iambickilometer]

You probably are.

Poor Kuro-puu indeed. Denied! [which I have been yelling out more and more as Tsubasa progresses...]

Thanks!

[l0t0phage]

XD

This serie is all about denial, isn't it? My good old friend denial...

;)

(I love this icon of yours so much XD)

[iambickilometer]

It is a beautiful icon. It's either sahara_storm's or evercool's, I think...

It's all about denial. I'm really surprised they don't just have a world set in Egypt and get it over with already...

[kenarbes]

Wow! I love getting inside Kurogane's head. Applauds you.

[iambickilometer]

It's always quite fun. Thanks!

Thank you!

[evilteddybear10]

I'm not sure why, but there's just something special about your writing. Something unique. Besides the things I've already stated that is.

Is it because it's presented in not your take on the situation, or your take on the characters, but your take on the charaters' take on the situation. :) *snicker* Sorry that just came out in a silly way.

It's like your thought process is so linear. The story not only has a clear beginning, middle, and end, but also leads through those in order word to word. What is it about your writing? I've already stated how I think you are very good at not just expressing yourself with words, but it's actually more like you use the words to manipulate your readers to feel the same emotion.

Is it that you have a different take on things? A unique view?

I think the thing it is is probably the logic to your emotion and the emotion to your logic. How they're intimately connected.

Or maybe more than two of your fics at once has caused me to start thinking too much. O.o

Re: Thank you!

[iambickilometer]

I'm glad you think so. Ah! Again, thank you. You make me blush, which is not an easy feat.

That sounds something like it. Most of writing does not have a set plot when I write it, and I try to let the characters determine what happens based on their reactions to whatever outer forces act upon them. Like Newton's Laws of Prose? (Which should be a literary term. It really should.) So I guess it is my take on their take, which makes sense to me.

I might have a unique view. Maybe it just comes with trying to get into everyone's head I meet or read about. Or overanalysing everything? I do that a lot... But I wouldn't be the one to judge that, being, as I am, myself.

Now, the last statement could be just as true.

(And I must say, if your writing style is anything like your commenting style, you must be damn good. You're really eloquent. It's a pleasure to read your comments. :D)

Re: Thank you!

[evilteddybear10]

Thank you for the compliment, but I'm afraid I'll have to disagree. Maybe someday, but I have a long way to go.

Re: Thank you!

[iambickilometer]

I'd like to be the judge of that. Have you any of your writing online?

[bolin]

Ah love, ah denial, ah Kuro-puu XD sweetness!

[iambickilometer]

Denial is quite fun. :D