genfluff for Maddie <3

Apr 14, 2008 22:25

Because you deserve something fuzzy and feel-good.

Title: Pause
Fandom: TRC
Wordcount: 685
A/N: It was whipped out in an hour or so (had to pause for AMAZING Vasen concert) and thus may not be as good as it could, but I was under time contraints. I HOPE YOU LIKE IT ANYWAY, MADDIE. Much love.
If you didn't get it yet, this is for
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ldydragon7 April 15 2008, 14:25:27 UTC
Ohhhh I love it! Very nice, happy, peaceful feel to this. I absolutely love the family bonds they have.

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iambickilometer April 16 2008, 02:32:25 UTC
Thanks! Family fluff - especially surrogate family fluff - is a great weakness of mine. I'm glad I did it well. :D

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rufustehshinra April 15 2008, 23:56:40 UTC
*FLAILFLAILFLAIL!* That was the most perfect thing to see waking up from my nap! I'm a whore for fluffy genfic, especially when I'm sick. You do it so perfectly, you awesome, awesome wonderful person! ♥ >w<

I think my favorite thing was when you used "ornery." My grandma used to say that a lot and I miss her. ♥ It brought up good memories.

Though after that, I really like Kurogane reading Fai's smile so well. You showed their "family ties" really well.

It's nice to see them all acting together like a family. Mokona wishes that this happened more often because of simple things like this rainstorm, and less often because of danger or damage done.

I have to totally agree with Mokona. *hugs* Thanks so much, hun. You really cheered me up. ♥♥♥

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iambickilometer April 21 2008, 23:26:49 UTC
hah, late reply is late. XD

I am so glad you liked it, though. Mm, genfic is tasteh.

It's a good word.

And my favourite part was that the cheering-up mission was successful. :D I hope things are going better for you now.

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flakedice April 24 2008, 16:13:50 UTC
This was glorious! 'furry white ticket across the universe'! 'small and irksome'! 'ze' and 'hir'! - I love your turn of phrase. And 'Kurogane thinks ninja thoughts that will never really be decipherable' XD Ah, I love it! :D it's lovely to read something so sweet and peaceful from you. Not that I am suggesting you enjoy portraying violence in any way XD

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iambickilometer April 25 2008, 02:50:47 UTC
Thank you! I found it it rather clever myself. :D I am capable of writing peaceful and sweet. I just choose to exercise my right not to do so. XD

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evercool May 5 2008, 04:59:34 UTC
It's somehow fluffy and angsty all at once! Haha, I loved it though. The ending was my favorite, though bittersweet. ^^

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iambickilometer May 5 2008, 05:11:56 UTC
I don't think I'm very good at getting angst to stay away. >.> I'm glad you did.

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