you're my shining star

[iambickilometer]

    Before I go on to the fic, I'd like to relate a funny story.
    I went to the orthopedic on Monday to find out what the hell was wrong with my legs and why they were constantly in dire pain. After a Holmes-worthy series of deductions, he tells me I have a pair of genetic flat feet (which I knew), over-tight hamstrings (news to me), and

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[sadie_dandelion]

Awe...I thought it was quite cute and soft-hearted until the last paragraph...as for a suggest you might have wanted, I wouldn't have one that didn't include Fai wanting to drink a little longer, but "revulsion" kills that thought.
Anyway, I like little gestures of love like holding other's wrist, therefore almost hand. ♥

[iambickilometer]

Well, Fai can't be in horrible mental pain ALL the time. Somethimes it's gotta be a little less, or it wouldn't still affect him so much.

I can't tell if you're saying you liked how he didn't want to drink, or you disliked it, or something else entirely. Sorry. Too many negatives...

But thanks! And for the suggestion as well.

[sadie_dandelion]

I'm saying your story had the angst required when writing about Vamp!Fai, but then at the end it became somewhat thick. So maybe to kame it flow with how the story was going to be at least not make Fai hate drinking so much. Add sentimentality. But now I sound like I'm lesturing, I'm explaining. Ignore me.

[iambickilometer]

huh. That probably would work.

thanks!

[l0t0phage]

I... am truly in awe with your writing. This one above the rest I've read, I must admit, touched me, beyond words. My throat is quite tight right now.
The atmosphere is so perfectly set, the characters are so much like them, not OOC at all, on the contrary. It's so touching... I'm currently at a loss for words right now... just know that it moved me deeply.

:)

[iambickilometer]

I am blown away by such praise and very happy you were so moved by my writing.

[l0t0phage]

You truly deserve it... I am happy to be moved so too... it's so unsual...

[areku1993]

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I love it and I love you and would propose had my wives not shot down any ideas for another wife.
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Thank's for taking my prompt~~!

[iambickilometer]

I think I've already been married. [checks previous journal entries] Yeah.

I'm so glad you appreciated it! Thank you for the prompt. It was fun to write.

[shinzuku]

That was good.

[iambickilometer]

Thank you.

[fengtianshi]

Beautiful! Loved the fact that they couldn't see, it's a splendid idea!!!

[iambickilometer]

Thanks! It was one of those randoms inspirations.

and your icon is even funnier having read translations of Horitsuba...