it was the strangest start...

Feb 28, 2008 16:45

ON TIME, DAMMIT. I AM ACCOMPLISHED.

Also, don't be deterred by the end of Part II. There is definitely more. =_=

Title: Code Blue Part II (7/7)
Fandom: xxxHOLiC
Word Count: 2,113
A/N: This one has the curious effect of seeming to me to be both too long-winded and too quick. Anyway, a couple introductions. You'll hate me for the ending, but Part III has ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fic: xxxholic, series: code blue

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cheloya February 29 2008, 01:23:20 UTC
*throws up hands* OH HELL YES. ♥ I hope that's who I think it is. *___* I love you forever.

But I have no idea where this is going. XD

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 02:07:04 UTC
And who do you think it might be? :D

Of course you don't. That's to find out next part.

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smokexscribbles February 29 2008, 02:18:08 UTC
Fuuma? *is surprised*

Well. Makes sense, I suppose.

Anyway! Hooray for chapters. Hooray for new parts! Boo for This man… looks exactly like his sister.

What kind of ending is that? You LIVE to torment me, don't you? Now I have to wait another week.

I've been inspired. *toddles off to write*

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 02:57:09 UTC
FUCK YES FUUMA.

XD

Hah. My suspense brings all the fans to the yard. Damn right, it's better than yours? I could teach you, but I'd have to charge.

>.> Anyway. Erm. Excellent.

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nebulia February 29 2008, 03:05:04 UTC
Watanuki was ready to deliver a tongue-lashing, but the prisoner only sighed. “How are you two planning on doing that? You’re not safe going back up there, and you can’t expect to make your way safely through the oubliette on your own. Even those last escapees had help.” He gestured vaguely toward the darkness that surrounded them. “Unlike myself, you two will have a time limit. I imagine you’ll starve easily.”

I am reminded of Labyrinth, that movie with David Bowie. A lot. Hearing "oubliette" and "time limit" in the same paragraph just makes me go...LABYRINTH!

In another connection to said movie, whether you want to hear it or not: I never thought anyone could be as creepy, as cool, and as in love (and in denial) as Jareth could be. And then I met Seishirou.

And at least no one's dead this ending? I'm kind of looking forward to the next part, though! XP

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 03:43:03 UTC
YES YOU CAUGHT IT. :DDD YOU ARE MY NEW HERO. though not as much as Faery-jess, who just recently sent me the soundtrack. >.> I had watched Labyrinth earlier on the day I began this chapter. There was only one thing I could do with this chapter.

DUDE. JARETH = SEISHIROU. I never saw it, but YOU ARE SO RIGHT. Except Subaru is no Sarah.

At least. XD I almost killed off Subaru, though. It was the plot that saved him in the end. Only kind of, though? D:

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nebulia February 29 2008, 03:47:11 UTC
OH-HO! Someone else sees the Jareth/Seishirou connection. And I can see some similarities in Subaru and Sarah, but only because they coth possess large quantities of should-be-annoying-but-is-somehow-endearing-naivete. And then the similarity ends, because Subaru is not a spoiled suburban teenage girl (Thank God).

DUDE! CROSSOVER! Or a morph (lol, Subaru accidentally wishes his sister away and has to solve the Labyrinth, which is, of coruse, ruled by Seishirou. Of course, he'd have to fail--stupid Tokyo Babylon tragedy...)!

Shutting up now.

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 03:57:15 UTC
BUT IT'S SO APPARENT. I suppose you're right about that one. But yes, thank god. Or Joss Whedon. Or David Bowie. Same thing.

ONE OF US MUST WRITE THIS.

NO DON'T. You are making my day.

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 04:50:58 UTC
I am, aren't I? XD Thanks. And yes, a mystery. Well...you ought to think of more than just brothers and sisters. Be creative.

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yuismoon February 29 2008, 04:23:03 UTC
You... evil.. PERSON. THING, OBJECT, WHATEVER. YOU'RE NOT EVEN HUMAN ANYMORE YOU'RE SO EVIL.

*Totally thought that instead of "oubliette", you said the French word "oublier", which is actually the origin of the former word*

Omfg, there's a third part? You were right, this is insanely epic.

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 04:38:06 UTC
HAH. I AM CRUEL AND UNUSUAL. FLATTERY WILL GET YOU EVERYWHERE, MY DEAR.

XD Nice.

There's a third part. There's also a fourth part, a fifth part, and probably more. I MEANT WHAT I SAID AND I SAID WHAT I MEANT. A FANTHING IS FAITHFUL, ONE HUNDRED PER CENT.

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yuismoon February 29 2008, 04:43:35 UTC
gjkasdhagjks BUT. OH MY GOD WE'LL HAVE TO WAIT LIKE, A WHOLE YEAR IF NOT MORE TO GET TO THE ENDING, WON'T WE? I KIND OF HATE YOU AND KIND OF LOVE YOU AT THE SAME TIME.

And as you can see, the shift key is my one true love.

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iambickilometer February 29 2008, 04:49:59 UTC
MAYBE NOT - wait, who am I kidding. Most likely. XD

Obviously so.

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