"Oh. Okay, I'm dying. Focus on the dying."

[iambic5]

Guys I should probably not be writing tragedies, I love my characters too much to kill them. But regardless, here is another chapter! :D

Title: Lord of Fire, Lord of Night (2/?)
Summary: A land torn by rebellion. A fearless general and his ambitious wife. A prophecy that will change everything. Sound familiar? Well... not quite. IN THIS CHAPTER:

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[badplanmobile]

THAT'S FANTASTIC. Also, I'm totally seeing what you said about writing like an actor. It's everywhere. Favorite bits: the dream sequence, and the omnipresent serpentine shapes moving in the background. Also, just the entire ambiance.

ALSO. EMBER = KEY. YOU KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT.

[iambic5]

OH SWEET BUTTERY JESUS YOU'RE RIGHT AUGH.

...wow, just when I thought it couldn't get worse to be Masa.

But other than that: eee, thank you! ^_^ I wasn't -intending- the dragons to be a recurring motif but now they're totally going to be. *makes a note*