Comments | iam_paranoid: With the Carousel of Time (We Go Round and Round and Round)

iam_paranoid

With the Carousel of Time (We Go Round and Round and Round)

Sep 27, 2010 21:11

Title: With the Carousel of Time (We Go Round and Round and Round)
Pairing: Cololal
Rating: K+
Beta-ed by: yearofus

( Lal may be a girl, but she’s going to make her parents regret, wholeheartedly, for not giving her that y-chromosome. )

fanfic, khr, cololal

Comments 12

thedooodler September 27 2010, 15:31:26 UTC

you floor me every.single.time. :/

honestly, the only reason i created this journal was to read your fics. XD

iam_paranoid September 28 2010, 09:17:21 UTC

dood, youve got to be less kind. :O

eclats_de_voix September 27 2010, 17:40:47 UTC

I don't like this becuase I don't think lal wishes she had a dick. I think its possible to be feminine, tough, and professional like a cut-throat businessman, which is what lal is. She wouldn't destroy girly things as much as be interested in the more masculine things. I just don't like how you handled this, as a feminist.

iam_paranoid September 28 2010, 09:18:52 UTC

I wanted to give her dimension, but perhaps got pretty extreme in the process. Regardless, I myself enjoyed writing this fic, though to each his own. Thanks for the review though. :)

neko11lover September 28 2010, 01:58:52 UTC

YOU. THIS.

While I was reading this, all my hair stood up on its ends. I do think she isn't girly. not at all, and although I couldn't imagine her doing those things to her doll, I also can't imagine her playing with them (that part, I found a bit extreme).

My favorite part would be when she was already in military school - I think that it's more Lal-like for me and asdjf;ajfa; that last part. I think you did the ColoLal bits really well ♥

iam_paranoid September 28 2010, 09:20:56 UTC

Thank you. You're always too kind; always aksljd ;_;

This will be my last piece for a... long long long long time.

(And you're right, KHR is getting a little boring-ish. This, given how I spent a year oogling over it, is kind of sad.)

neko11lover September 30 2010, 08:39:51 UTC

Aww, good luck and take care on whatever will be keeping you busy. /pats your back

(Yeah, that goes for me, too. I've invested a lot of time in this fandom, as well =_= I really do hope it picks up soon. )

venisu September 28 2010, 15:01:37 UTC

i love how you describe her growing up omg.. i love that y chromosome line!!!!!!
HEEEEEEEEEE! i love khr D: it's sad the anime is ending T_T

I'M VERY NICE WITHOUT THE Y CHROMOSOME :D

iam_paranoid November 13 2010, 06:09:24 UTC

GOSH IM SO SORRY FOR SUCH A LATE REPLY

PARDON ME FOR MY LOSERNESS ORZ ;_;

haha thanks! :D

NOPE MISSY, 2X CHROMOSOMES ARE MORE THAN ENOUGH FOR YOU

inkstainedblade November 13 2010, 02:40:03 UTC

I CRIED.

THIS IS.... COLLONELLO I LOVE YOU!

Patching up, (haha!) THIS IS SUCH A NICE PIECE OF WORK! Even if you didn't incorporate Colonello all throughout the fic, you have shown the impact he's made on Lal even at such short notice. The essence of his sacrifice was captured as well and you have made a good job in exploiting it! :D

This is such a nice fic that I could hardly say anything else. (My tears are still flowing!XD) Good job! :D

iam_paranoid November 13 2010, 06:12:32 UTC

Gosh you're too nice! Thanks for the raving review :DD

Actually, I loved writing this fic but it was quite poorly received. *A* Nonetheless, you have made my day, so thank you orz

Here. /hands you a tissue/handkerchief/mop/basin (delete as appropriate)

inkstainedblade November 13 2010, 14:52:24 UTC

I shall glomp you, you know. HAHAHAHA. XDD

*takes the mop and basin*