Fuck me, 3164 words & only halfway?

Jul 05, 2009 14:39

At 3164 words in, I'm only on suicide number 5 out of 10. Talkative little fucker my suicide artist turns out to be ( Read more... )

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Needing a Haiku pendraw July 11 2009, 00:13:07 UTC
I sort of need a Haiku,
Around 10 years ago I ended finally this 20+-year relationship.

I just heard she died last week.

I was mostly a lover. Reflecting backwards
I realize that I could have tried to make it more and or better but didn’t know how to negotiate.
I’m a late bloomer around figuring what these needs of mine are.

Her full-time girlfriends (she was never monogamous) had no picnic. Mostly they did all the work in the relationship. Like indentured servants to a rock star.

They say her current partner is like a saint. And I believe them.

She would have wanted a saint as a partner.
Lets just say my level of co-dependence is less than hers and all the other official girlfriends before her.

And I am mourning her. But I wonder how much is a figment of my projection.

I am not a documented "friend" invited to her funeral processions.

I like your Haikus because they create an ocean of inner space.

I need that space now to float on.

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