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Mar 14, 2005 21:18

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pimpinpinto_29 March 15 2005, 02:32:11 UTC

im sorry .. but i like all of them .. :)
its hard to choose just one .. <3

pimpinpinto_29 March 15 2005, 02:37:39 UTC

okay. i decided # 1 and 2
are my favorite.. lol

All of them! somethingsavvy March 15 2005, 02:33:58 UTC

Jk I really like #1 nice rhyming pattern. #3 thought I like some of the metophors especially the "her voice made angels jealous part"
I guess #3 is my favorite and not cause it's the only one not about suicide. but the comparisons are imaginative and it flows well

pifythebohemian March 15 2005, 02:35:07 UTC

Omgoodness, I love em all..but my fave is number 2.

corndogdisaster March 15 2005, 02:35:30 UTC

2- i like the ending and i like 3 too

shay_tha_effer March 15 2005, 02:38:36 UTC

i LOVE number 3 it got a big AWWWWW from me lol <3 <3 chris <3 <3