Empire: Children of Manhattan

[i_am_your_spy]

Empire: Children of Manhattan

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[i_am_your_spy]

Ah, I always write. I'm probably going back to writing original stuff for awhile, but we'll see.

[tonks07]

This is a beautiful story. I've been going through the links off and on all day. Write more Watchen fics! Your have thier characterization down pat!

[i_am_your_spy]

Thank you! And yes, I am working on it. :)

[minuscapitolina]

The last line is absolutely brilliant and heartbreaking. At the very first chapter of this story I had a pinch of a thought that since Laurie is joining Jon, she might as well be made into a matter similar to Jon's structure. Your portrayal of Laurie is lovely, since I was not so fond of her.

I seriously thought Rorschach was dead too and this will all end in tears and bloood. Lovely. It was also kind of sad seeing Adrian dead.

[i_am_your_spy]

Yeah, I think Laurie's motivation also might have had something to do with not wanting to puke every time he took her somewhere or "forgot" she needed oxygen, haha.

I actually wasn't going to kill Adrian, but then it kind of happened. And it made me sad too.

[akemi42]

Oh my god that was so wonderful. Sweet, angsty, perfect. This story is so insanely well written and creative!

[i_am_your_spy]

Thank you!

[clowwolf]

Oh goodness gracious.

I have to admit to you something - I have been absolutely addicted to your writings for the last week or so. Your works, they're brilliant, shining pieces of literature that I could only wish to ever find again in another writer. Really, my friend, you are wonderful.

[i_am_your_spy]

Thank you! *blush*