What If I Wanted To? [1/1] [Sequel To How Do You Know]

[i_am_the_broken]

Title: What If I Wanted To? [1/1] [Sequel To How Do You Know?]
Author: i_am_the_broken
Pairing: Ferard
Rating: …Drugs, and sexual tendencies…Haha.
Disclaimer: No.
Summary: What if I wanted to love you?He ran it through his head over and over again, realizing he probably fucked up.
Author’s Note:Okay it has been a wee bit since I got back into writing but after

Comments

[ipanicdaily]

I really liked that ^^

thought it was cute and good.

I liked Ray going like "be my guest"

xP

[i_am_the_broken]

I thought it might be funny.
Haha, glad you liked.
=]

[vickslovesslash]

I like it!
And if you have a wonderful idea for this to carry on and you think it'll work in this universe, then write it dear! I trust you to only write what you think will work =D I do however love these characters.
They are awesome and that last line from Frank amused me. He is a pansy.
Good writing!
<3

[i_am_the_broken]

Hee hee Frank is a pansy.
Yeah I think I am going to, it's going to be kinda centered on their addictions and trying to live alone and...it sounds better in my head...
Lol.
You'll see.

[vickslovesslash]

Looking forward to it hun =D
<3

[bombcel]

Yay!!! the boys betting on two lovers is so funny. .hehehe. .love it. .

[i_am_the_broken]

I thought it would kinda lighten the mood? Or something like that.
Haha.
<3

[emilyrose2005]

I'm in full agreement with vickslovesslash, I adore the boys as you've written them, and want to read more!
I also think your way with dialogue reads true. One note I would give you just on that point, is perhaps you can separate the lines rather than combine them in one sentence? It didn't happen often, but as I'm accustomed to reading scripts, I noticed it...sorry!
You wrote one line I may make my Motto on Life:
~~~how he looked didn’t matter because if Gerard couldn’t accept him at his worst then he didn’t deserve him at his best.~~~ That's brilliant!!
So, more, please???

(oh, btw...I'm so *meming* this!!)

XOXOXO

[i_am_the_broken]

YAY a meming!!!
I'll try meh mest to work on that, sorry if it got a little confusing.
=D
XOXOX

[eveseventy6]

loooooved this!!! as i knew i would ;)
what a great emotional roller coaster!
the addition of the other boys was awesome
i loves me some bobert lol
and when frankie and gee finally made up and got it on... mmmmm HOTNESS
and this line:
“Oh and by the way, for your information, I’m not a pussy, I’m a pansy! Get it right fuckers!”
totally brought the LOLZ. brilliant bb XD
and i would love it if you continued this storyline!!! <3 xxxx

[i_am_the_broken]

Aw, THANKS.
And I do believe I will!
Probably another update tomorrow or the next day.
=]