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mikaerayohiko May 15 2011, 10:47:39 UTC
I like how this was written. In many levels this is by far one of the best thing I've read :P so memoed and loved <333333 :DD made my day Onho<3

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i_am_rolling May 15 2011, 16:17:42 UTC
Really, thank you so very much for saying that. Your comments make me want to continue writing anything and everything for as I long as I can.
Thank you c:

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ex_argh May 15 2011, 11:38:59 UTC
I really like the way you write. Although I am going to point out this (especially since you did it twice):

not too good-looking, just chock-full with all the average qualities ( excluding brain power ) : dark eyes, chocolate-brown hair ( which he admits he'd call 'sexy' ) and a pretty descent body ( he swears he has some sort of muscle on him ).

decent :P no "s" (with an 's' it means to 'descend' i.e. go down a flight of stairs etc)

anyway like everyone else ♥ I loved this^^;

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i_am_rolling May 15 2011, 16:15:12 UTC
Thank you :))
I hate it when I make stupid spelling mistakes like that (even twice, hahah). Haha well thank you for pointing that out for me c:

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ex_argh May 16 2011, 01:16:49 UTC
no problem^^

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shimrayoung May 15 2011, 17:52:15 UTC
wahhh i liked this a lot:DD
it had this unique feeling...like i was reading the story through ur mind...?
gosh, this sounds so nerdy and creepy.

anyway, i like the way you described each situation. Onew is so priceless~

--onew grins back, feeling as happy as minho ( again, for some inconceivable reason ) "can't get any better than this, right? you can walk around naked and it wouldn't matter."

minho stops, perturbed.

"i can't explain that." ( his random bouts of onew sangtae never fail him )--

he is lucky, minho didnt ask more xDD

--minho's face starts growing, bigger and bigger until he ascertains that he's an inch away from his---

LOL, bigger and biggerxD

--they meet.
sparks fly.--

why.does.it.make.me.remember.sims2.? XD

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i_am_rolling May 16 2011, 00:53:07 UTC
thank you so much, i i'm really happy you liked it so much.
and i cannot believe you'd gotten so immersed into it-that's how i feel when i'm writing the story.
really thank you,

and haha i have no explanation for that. :))

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weerainbow May 15 2011, 23:04:34 UTC
This was...I can't find the right word aigoo...something I liked a lot ;o) I don't really know what exactly draws me into it but I got really immersed in the story and felt like I was floating through their world as I watched their relationship grow. It was a nice feeling ^^

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i_am_rolling May 16 2011, 00:55:46 UTC
really, thank you, it makes me feel so happy that you can get so deeply immersed into it, i hadn't known this story could have such an effect,
thank you. c:

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kim_jaejoong May 18 2011, 05:34:22 UTC
I don't really know what to say but I just feel like I have to comment LOL

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kim_jaejoong May 18 2011, 05:37:57 UTC
wait. actually, I have something to say now.

THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME.

i don't even.♥

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i_am_rolling May 18 2011, 23:52:24 UTC
I THANK YOU FOR YOUR DOUBLE COMMENT OF AWESOMENESS. ((:
i would bold and enlarge it but i have no idea how to do that.

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