LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 28: The Copernican Principle

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[jexia]

Really enjoyed this :)

You have "he wanted to friends" that you might want to be-ify, BTW.

[i_17bingo]

Good catch. I made so many changes in my second pass that I was sure proofing was going to suffer.

[theun4givables]

Poor Fred! I caught on partway through, but it must be so hard on the dead, sometimes. Especially when they don't realize they're dead! :)

[i_17bingo]

It can be such a relief to find out though, especially for someone like Fred.

[swirlsofblue]

Awesomely done. I absolutely love all the descriptions, driving to the conclusion brilliantly.

I did suspect that Fred was dead but I love the reveal of it.

[i_17bingo]

I don't think there was any way I could have pulled off a successful Sixth Sense surprise regardless of how much work I put into it. However, can you blame him for not noticing?

[penpusher]

Somehow, I half expected a brown Great Dane to come bounding into the classroom. But, I'm sure that was just me. Mystery, indeed.

[i_17bingo]

Yaaaaay! You noticed!

[adoptedwriter]

This is great! AW

[i_17bingo]

Thanks!