LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 23: The Fiction of the Fix

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

I like all the description in the first couple of paragraphs. AW

[i_17bingo]

Cafeteria food, though, am I right?

[rayaso]

This was all kinds of fun! I really enjoyed the light banter/dialogue, and the idea of "presentation" with "work-study food-service employees" is mind-blowing. Good job!

[i_17bingo]

If there's one thing Gina de Costa will never do, it's give up.

[roina_arwen]

I hope you enjoy your theme park as much as I enjoyed this entry! Loved the Dr Who reference as regards the psychic paper!

[i_17bingo]

Thanks! I normally avoid pop-culture references (I don't like to date myself, nor do I like to alienate those who aren't familiar with them), but I'm not above subtle allusions.

[jexia]

I liked this.

Something minor (maybe deliberate?)

pallet noun
a straw mattress.
a crude or makeshift bed.

palate noun
1. the roof of the mouth, separating the cavities of the mouth and nose in vertebrates.
2. a person's ability to distinguish between and appreciate different flavours.

[i_17bingo]

Thanks for the catch. I thought I had that one.

[beeker121]

I know Rafaela needs to move on if she thinks eating in the student cafeteria is a good idea, even if it is only a means to an end.

in re the map of Qatar: I wonder what else she has stashed in her bag.

[i_17bingo]