LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 20: Shibusa

[i_17bingo]

I'm not the only one who wrote about the Ridges Asylum/Athens Mental Health Institute and Margaret Schilling this round--eska818 did, as well, as part of our Week 20 Intersection.

Comments

[bleodswean]

This is FANTASTIC!!!! Some of your best best best dialogue ever! Snappy and explanatory and expository and just all around delightful to read. I began copying with this brilliant line - You out-riddled a troll. That entire exchange is flawless! But had to stop stopping myself over each amazing line because there are so many! This is really top-notch story telling here.

[i_17bingo]

Wow. I am blushing here. Thank you for all of the kindness!

[mamas_minion]

Nice story I would like to hear more about the school in the cave.

[i_17bingo]

Not knowing what's there might be scarier than me showing you.

[rayaso]

I would also like to know more about the school in the cave! This was a fascinating story, with great dialog, and it works so well with the intersection.

[i_17bingo]

Well, when you get to go first on the writing duties, you get to call the shots...

[uncawes]

Thus far on my readings this week, you're the only one who's managed to keep their regular characters in the intersection story. Bravo sir!
And, nice story. But, is my memory failing me or is the first we've heard of Rafaela punching a wendigo? Brave girl, either way

[i_17bingo]

No, Rafaela has never punched a wendigo "onscreen." But it seems like the kind of thing she'd do in a panic.

[eternal_ot]

I second this..Was amazed that you used your regular characters..Kudos! way to go.

[eternal_ot]

Nice..:) I like how you meshed the two together...Good job! Enjoyed reading this.:)

[i_17bingo]

They have been fated to meet for a long time, but for some reason, this was time. There was an Intersection in my Intersection...