LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 13: Open Topic (In Which It Goes Pop)

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[bleodswean]

FANTABULOUS!!! Great job on combining action and fast-paced dialogue laced with humour. That's gotta be hard to do and this was impressively loaded with it! Fun fun fun. I adored the egg and the golf pencil.

[i_17bingo]

The action is really hard for me, actually, so I'm glad it worked. Thanks for letting me know.

[basric]

Loved it.

[i_17bingo]

Thank you so much!

[eternal_ot]

Oh! Cool it Rafaela from last time's entry...Awesome sketch...I kinda like her Kickass attitude..;)And as far as this entry is concerned..it kept me hooked right till the end...totally action packed!! Well written..HATS OFF!

[i_17bingo]

The only problem with Rafaela is that she's being introduced really out of sequence. Last week was really far down her timeline (and an entry I did for a Season 7 Home Game you can find in the tag takes place several years after this one). I really need to unravel that.

Sorry--I'm thinking aloud. *ahem* Thank you for the encouragement. Your enthusiasm helps keep me going through all my fussiness.

[eternal_ot]

:)

[roina_arwen]

Loved this! I can see myself thinking this: The kamaitachi approached, angry and strangely adorable. Great job with making an odd situation very relateable. :)

[i_17bingo]

As relateable as observing three flying weasels with swords for arms could possibly be. It's obvious from this example that anime could only have come from Japan if these are the kinds of monsters that haunt them.

[yachiru]

Very Douglas Adams-y. I like!

[i_17bingo]

If I'm being honest, Rafaela is kind of my take on seventies-era Doctor Who, so there's definitely some Douglas Adams in there.