Comments | i_17bingo: LJ Idol, Week 9: Marching Orders

i_17bingo

LJ Idol, Week 9: Marching Orders

Jan 15, 2011 00:23

( You will obey! )

lj-idol, max, writing, lisa

Comments 11

myrna_bird January 15 2011, 20:27:31 UTC

Oh, Wow. High fives! Smooth. Loved this story. Terrific dialogue!!

i_17bingo January 15 2011, 20:46:30 UTC

Wow, thanks!

semiexpat January 15 2011, 22:45:37 UTC

I liked this one a great deal. Nice job!

sweeny_todd January 15 2011, 23:52:20 UTC

haha! very smooth indeed :-)

faerie_spark January 16 2011, 02:31:42 UTC

I didn't quite understand this after the first reading, but very much enjoyed it. You captured the raw sensuality of casual flirting with strangers.

i_17bingo January 16 2011, 02:48:09 UTC

To be fair, this is part of something I've been constructing over the course of LJ Idol for my own nefarious purposes (*maniacal laughter*), so I apologize for the confusion and thank you for the compliment.

imafarmgirl January 17 2011, 18:10:49 UTC

Great dialogue in this piece.