What I hate...What I love

[i3e_mine]

Title: What I hate…What I love
Pairing: JongHo
Genre: romance, a bit drama. smut
PG: NC-17
Warning: Bad english
Summary: Minho is a son from a mafia and he doesn’t like his life till one special person comes into his life.

Minho punches the other man into his face and he falls. Two other man runs to him and tries to attacks him. The young boy turns

Comments

[mistxcloud]

oh..I love you so much my cute maknae! more cuter than SHINee, f(x), SUJU and SNSD maknae!!!!
you're the best!!!!
Unnie love you for give me the best present I wanted!! ^3^
I love it even you said it fail but for me...IS THE BEST SMUT SPECIAL 4 ME!!!
XDDDD
well the ending it's not so weird..people always move on...I love it!!
I think I couldn't stop grinning like a fool! HAHAHAHA!!!
Love you so much as high as the high as the sky!!! XDDDD
<3333

[i3e_mine]

Thank you unnie :DD
You're the best too ♥♥♥

Haha I think it's weird x'DD
But thank you for the lovely comment and I'm happy you like it <33

[dancingtaemin]

Woah, this is rather... uh special (:
A lot of different emotions in one fic, hah .
But lovely plot though, I reeaaaallly like Jonghyun's character in here 8D
Oh, and just a note, not meaning to offend you in anyway whatsoever, but you might wanna improve on your grammars and tenses .
A wide range of vocabulary would be great too !

(Not that I'm really good in all these either, heh :/)

[i3e_mine]

Haha Thank you for your comment and thanks for reading ;DD
I know I'm sucks at grammatic and words etc xDD
but I'll try my best to get better :)

[dancingtaemin]

Haha that's alright :D
Oh, and any other fics that you have in line ?
I can't wait for another post of yours, haha .
Perhaps Jongho again ? Or Jongyu ?
Lol, sorry, these 2 are my otp :P

[jewelry_flower]

I think you have a nice spot in this story. You can break the conversations into lines, so it'll be easier to read.
Moreover, you can create a more tense ending, it's a little bit short :) And I think you tried your best on your grammar, but it needs to be improved :)
After all, it's a cute story, and yeah, Minho needs to love his his life because of JJong :)
Fighting!

[i3e_mine]

Thank you for the commend and for reading:DD
Ohh...I know the ending is short I wan to write more but my head was empty of ideas -.-''
I don't like my own ending xDD but I couldn't change it q.q (empty head)
Of course Minho needs to love his life if not Jjong would kill him xD

[praia06]

well done for the first time ;) the idea was good but i thought you rushed the story too much...
I love fluff but somehow the ending was way too perfect in my opinion.. no offence tough! each to their own right? :)

[i3e_mine]

Thank you for the comment :) and for reading my FF ^^
I know.. I want to write it longer but I want finished this and upload this before the 24. 11 ^^''
so I must short this a bit xDD
Yeah I know the ending sucks xD way too perfect... x)

:)