[Fic] Acting - Ryan/Esposito

[hyuuganeji11]

Oh geez, this didn't come out as planned at all...
+_+
I actually tried to steer back in the actual direction of the prompt one time, but... Grrr... OP, don't hate me.

For this prompt.

--

"Okay, here she comes. You ready?"

"Been ready since Day 1, bro. Let's do this thing already."

With a nervous sigh, Kevin turned to the coffee machine, watching Alexis

Comments

[nictusa]

I absolutely, positively LOVE perceptive!Alexis. It's a role that fits her character perfectly, and I think that you captured her simultaneous innocence (having a crush on Ryan) and maturity (her consequent conversation with Ryan) better than most fics that involve her.

So, yeah. High-five on that one.

Also, the Rock-Gods conversation (totally a tie between Led Zep and the Who)... WIN, and the scene with them incapable of looking away from each others' eyes was really sweet.

[hyuuganeji11]

Thank you sooooo much~~~
*flails*
Good to know I didn't completely bomb this~~~

[nictusa]

DEFINITELY not a bomb :)

[carnifax]

Why is everyone saying that their fics don't turn out the way they planned? Maybe planning is a bad thing, maybe everything should "not go as planned," because this was great. I liked the locked-eyes thing, and Ryan's babbling seemed very in-character for him. Esposito would be the one to initiate this kind of thing... And the kisses to Ryan's knuckles were really sweet. Good work. :)

Oh right-- and I'm friending you. Just so you know. :D

[hyuuganeji11]

xDD
I didn't plan it to be a somewhat angstfest on Ryan's part. 'Supposed to be pure crack, I think...
x33
Thank you~~~~~

Yay~

[roachstar]

That was AMAZING! Perfectly wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it :D

[hyuuganeji11]

x33
Thank you so much~~~!!!

[roachstar]

Oh btw I was the OP! :D

[evil_poptarts]

Ryan still refused to look up when Javier gently took his hands, and planted knight-like kisses on his knuckles.

"If you say so, princesa..."

I've read this more than once, and that part gets me everytime.
There's just something about Javier speaking Spanish..

Anyways, lovely piece.
Definitely added to my memories. :)