Prompt #5: Outsides

[hyungwhore]

Title: Momentary
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Outsides
Word Count: 254
Rating: G
Summary: A night in the SHINee dorm when Key doesn't want to sleep alone
Author's Notes: My attempt at fluff. Not as good as my creepy stuff, but, hey, I like it. (Though it'll probably go down as one of my least favorite in this prompt

Comments

[hyungwhore]

rofl I'm not sure I could write ridiculously cheesy if I tried.^^ Even if it is JongKey who do sometimes just scream to be over the top romantic and sappy and no thanks boys. lol

I'm glad you liked it! lol I always feel like I'm being soooo unoriginal when I'm thanking someone for reading and taking the time to comment. It's like "blahblah thanks for reading blahblah." But I really am super appreciative!!!

[sexxinelusive]

aw that was cute, the comfortable-ness of their relationship really comes out in this!

[hyungwhore]

yay! I was hoping that it would, actually. Since Key was just like, ohey I don't wanna sleep alone so I'mma cuddle up in your space now. ^^

Thank you so much for reading this and taking the time to comment. There's no not overly used way of saying this, I don't think. But I really, really appreciate it!!

[xxqod]

Beautiful as always! :D
Nice they have a place to escape the media ^^
And I sense some teasing with waking each other up? XD
It's nice! ^^
<3 ~~

[xxqod]

ROFL, where did my comment go? XD wth/
-I can't see it, so I comment again XD sorry if it's there 2 times-
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Beautiful as always! :D
It's nice they have a place where they can escape the media.
And I sense some teasing with waking each other up? ^^
Me like. :D
<3 ~~

[hyungwhore]

bb LJ likes to eat things on/about my journal. I can't even tell you how many times it's devoured an icon or just arbitrarily bugged out on itself. Totally annoying. And I can't see your original comment so don't worry about it. ^^

I was seriously giggling to myself a little when I wrote this, just thinking about what Jonghyun would do the next morning. He seems like he'd either be completely out of it in the mornings or a really irritating person. (lmfao now I'm just thinking of Teukie waking up the SuJu boys in Thailand....^^)

Thanks, as always, for reading this! I love your comments and I hope I keep writing things that you enjoy~~~

[hyungwhore]

lol now I can see your first comment. rofl LJ wth are you doing?

[aescapes]

what, no, don't belittle your capacity for fluff - this is very good, very sweet! it's the first thing i've read from you, so i can't compare it to something creepier just yet, but objectively speaking you approached it very nicely! you kept it simple and made the intent clear. (and hearing kibum call him 'baby' was so precious, idek. just. aw. ♥)

[hyungwhore]

I am notorious for belittling my own writing, especially if it's a genre I'm not really used to. I know that it's irritating when writers do that, and I don't mean to be a prat about it, really. T.T I just neeeever write in this genre so I'm all ~*~uncomfortable~*~ and maybe fishing for comments a teeny bit. (rofl do I get points to owning up to it? ><)

omg in my mind Kibum is constantly calling Jonghyun baby. I don't even know why, it just seems so freaking perfect like I just want to keysmash when I think about it.