Prompt #3: Ends

Feb 04, 2010 15:08

Title: Sanctuary
Fandom: SHINee
Characters: Kim Kibum, Kim Jonghyun
Prompt: Ends
Word Count: 325
Rating: PG
Summary: Running from something takes Kibum exactly where he belongs
Author's Notes: I don't even know what these are doing, anymore. This is another one wrote on my iPhone in the middle of the night. (This is what I do instead of sleeping.) ( Read more... )

shining shinee, jongkey, fanfiction

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blingasaurus February 5 2010, 01:08:16 UTC
lmfao bb you know i love you but this is not fluff. it is fantastic elastic! however. and yes i'm going to take a moment to sldskjdgf at you again about how your writing is so pretty with pretty words and phrases and the like.

i'm not rly sure what's going on in this fic, though? like, what key is running from, exactly? the way i interpreted it it's almost like he's trying to get away from their relationship, or the feelings he has for jonghyun, but in the end he realizes he can't cause they're in ~lurve~ and such.

amiriteamiriteamiriteeee???

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hyungwhore February 5 2010, 01:51:56 UTC
rofl I told you I can't write fluff. But ... It's a little fluffy.. At the end, isn't it? I mean, they hug. And Key is all sappy and cute... right? T.T And bb, you flatter me. ^///^ But rly, don't stop. lmfao

Yeaaaaaah I have the same feelings about this. lmfao As if I would know what exactly is happening. But yeah, I'm pretty sure that Key was running from the feelings he had from Jonghyun, the people in the church were his SM hyungs, the cottage is just a representation of the safety he feels with Jonghyun, blahblahblah.

So yeah you're right. ^^

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xxqod February 6 2010, 08:26:47 UTC
He's so lost!
I feel like he's running from his love for Jonghyun but in the end doesn't care about what other people think of him anymore. :)
*notices the comment is almost the same as blingasaurus'*
sorry...
XD
making you answer the same thing twice.
<3 ~~

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hyungwhore February 6 2010, 08:30:10 UTC
Aww! Don't worry about making me answer the same thing twice, bb. ^^

But like I said above, I'm fairly sure that's exactly what Kibum is running from. It's a bit abstract, because that's just the way I roll, but that's still exactly what is going on.

Like I've said twice now, I'm so glad that you're reading these, that you're enjoying them, and that you're taking the time to comment to let me know you're enjoying them!
... )

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prickilla February 9 2010, 14:03:15 UTC
your writing is so pretty xO
and the wording; i dunno what it is about but it totally captured me :X
this was so bittersweet and my music im listening to just made it all the more engaging.
key's running and all the icons (or whatever there called i seriously need to pay more attention in class) present in this was so relevant to the title. And then finding his way back to jonghyun in the end after that self-realisation was just ♥
why do i sort of sound incoherent =/

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hyungwhore February 10 2010, 02:16:21 UTC
aww bb you only sound a little incoherent. No worries!

I'm really glad that you took the time to leave a comment, especially about the things that you liked, in particular. It helps writing to know that someone actually pays attention instead of just reading and being like, oh yeah, I like this. ^^

rofl I've had a long day with not enough sleep and I feel like my return comment is soooo bad. ><

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hyeongsoap September 6 2014, 19:35:10 UTC
there's something so vague and good in the way you write, it is as if less than 1000 words are enough to let us, readers, know everything we need to know and that's it. it's like album, and pictures are alternative universes and i feel like i'm jumping from one page to another seeing this and that and wow aren't i a little late to the party anyway?

The heart wants what the heart can’t have hngh

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