a peculiar variation; [kyuhyun-centric; donghae/kyuhyun]

Oct 29, 2009 00:35

a peculiar variation
kyuhyun-centric, donghae/kyuhyun; pg-13
2,058 words
Summary: Kyuhyun is coming back tomorrow. a.k.a kyu suffers from anterograde amnesia a.k.a he cannot make new memories a.k.a he's stuck on a single day forever. For naegative and pinkweather. ♥

How can I forget you, he says, and it's not a question. )

pairing: donghae/kyuhyun, group: super junior

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ha3ngbok October 29 2009, 00:54:37 UTC
OMG YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART INTO A MILLION PIECES... I could imagine Kyu saying it over and over IDEKW T_T omg this is so well written...

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hyungdeul October 29 2009, 11:03:16 UTC
it seems like i have my work cut out for me today, piecing all your hearts back together. :( thanks for reading! ♥

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aboutl0ve October 29 2009, 02:36:09 UTC
-sob-
Kyu. ♥
-more sobbing-

Favorite thing is the astronomy books and the logbook. -sad sigh-

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hyungdeul October 29 2009, 11:07:28 UTC
*holds you as you cry* :( ♥

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aprilsfool6 October 29 2009, 03:20:29 UTC
Tomorrow will be a good day. He's going to see everyone again; they will be standing in a jagged line at the doorway with huge, stupid smiles on their faces. Heechul will pay up on that bet. Ryeowook will greet him with an apologetic embrace and Sungmin will be there to ruffle his hair in that annoying, familiar way. They will dance like lunatics around him as he watches from the couch and doubles over with laughter. Donghae will be right there next to him, arms around his neck, and he'll nestle back into the frame of his ribs when the laughter has died a natural death and everyone's asleep
Ugh. I was fine up until this last paragraph. And then I started bawling. Trying to piece together a coherent thought about how this last paragraph represents the past, present, and future... but nothing understandable is coming to me now. *sobs*

Thanks so much for sharing.

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hyungdeul October 29 2009, 11:09:45 UTC
you got exactly what i was going for with the last paragraph (and the last part tied with the first and all the rest) - the representation of past, present, future, the bitter irony of it all.

thank you so much for reading! *hands you a tissue* ♥

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mem'd. notablender October 29 2009, 03:55:33 UTC
oh my god. this is so sad. i feel like crying.
i haven't even read this properly because two of my friends are standing next to me chatting.
but oh my god. this is so good. i already knew what was going to happen but it still caught me by surprise.

There are things he could never forget. How to build the perfect Zerg army. i loved this line.

friending you.

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Re: mem'd. hyungdeul October 29 2009, 11:22:46 UTC
this is retribution for making me cry with your fic. /bricked

but coming from you, this really means a lot. thank you so much for reading! ♥ friending you back!

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kyu_x3 October 29 2009, 05:59:52 UTC
wahh, so sad D:
but so good and brilliant
and for the lack of better words, here's some spazzing.
OMG AHHH KYUHAE DSHGKJHDSFKGJKLDSDKLNKJDKSLJFKANKDSJKLFASK <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

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hyungdeul October 29 2009, 11:24:19 UTC
i take your spazzing whole-heartedly ♥ thank you so much for reading!

(OT: i adore your icon!)

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