Comments | hyungdeul: just the sight of you; [donghae/kyuhyun]

hyungdeul

just the sight of you; [donghae/kyuhyun]

Oct 04, 2009 01:05

just the sight of you
donghae/kyuhyun; pg-13
3,932 words
Even before the fateful party, Kyuhyun knows he's found the one to shake up his world. Companion piece to Oh My (Super Boy) but can be read as a stand-alone. It's basically the story told in Kyuhyun's POV with some added backstory. Zhou Mi also played an unexpectedly huge part in this lol.

( There is something to be said about relationships: he never gets the same results. Last month was a depressing run, some months back it was peaceful, and some more months back, it felt like it wasn't there. )

pairing: donghae/kyuhyun, group: super junior

Comments 35

darleenk October 4 2009, 15:34:04 UTC

I love getting the other side of the story, so this is majorly ♥ for me. :D Urgh, you. YOU. Idek. I just loved this. Sobs, I sound so repetitive in every comment I leave you.

Just, all of this. <333333333

hyungdeul October 4 2009, 15:48:00 UTC

Yes, me? :D

Don't worry about sounding repetitive! I treasure each and every one of these. ♥ to you back and thank you so much!

tees2mai October 4 2009, 18:18:18 UTC

LOVED THE 1ST ONE... LOVED THIS ONE XDDDDD

UR ZHOU MI WAS EPIC WIN XDDD

I ALWAYS PICTURED MIMI LIKE THT XDDD

hyungdeul October 5 2009, 09:38:27 UTC

Ahaha, thank you! Zhou Mi turned out to be the real star of this fic, huh? :)

loveisonthemenu October 5 2009, 00:28:13 UTC

your story is so cute. i really didn't think for there to be a supergirl mv AU, but there needs to be more.

hyungdeul October 5 2009, 09:39:07 UTC

I agree! The Supergirl MV is a gold mine for AUs :)

Thank you so much~!

loveisonthemenu October 5 2009, 09:46:12 UTC

i kind of want to see you make a verse out of this. /cries and fangirls

bunnylla October 6 2009, 08:30:54 UTC

OHMYSUPERBOY. Just the mere sight of this, and I was screaming, OH MY GOSH, THE SEQUEL IS FINALLY HERE! i'm so happy you did it, and actually nailed it better then the first one. I liked Kyu here, being so intelligent. intelligently addicted to Donghae. XDXDXD

and why does it have to be so damn good like this? YES IT IS, i insist you believe me hunn. I was like endulged in every scene. /wishing I was the girl in red dress, but I saw hints of Jessica. XP

YEY! \o/ i'm really impressed. you really made my idea a whole lot better. Adding a few friendship!Qmi around, the jazz lessons (i was imagining it and i drooled a bit, blame Donhae <3) and the drunk!Siwon. =))

and I offer you, as a gratitude of thanks, a GREAT BIG HUG! >:D<
and a box of invisible cookies. /bribes you to write moar. :D
i'm so demanding sorry.
I just so love you and your fics, BB. :D :*

hyungdeul October 6 2009, 11:19:37 UTC

Wow, this comment seriously made my day! ♥

Kyuhyun and what goes on in his head is fun to imagine. He's trying to hold on to his rationality whilst having this rollercoaster of emotions, and it's really fun to explore the possibilities with that.

The girl in the red dress is supposed to be Jessica! :) But I suppose since she's unnamed, it can be anyone you wish it to be.

I was afraid that I strayed a bit from the original idea (which really was just to start at the party from Kyu's POV), but Qmi being BFFs was just so hard to resist, so I took the idea and ran with it.

THANK YOU! ♥ *accepts cookies and hugs back*

misschatelle October 18 2009, 03:03:23 UTC

..... *faints*

OH. MY. GOD. THIS WAS JUST P-E-R-F-E-C-T.

*____*

I really love this!! It deserves to be in my memories! (And I don't have that many fics in memories.) You can feel proud. *acts overly superior*

hyungdeul October 20 2009, 22:46:56 UTC

thank you! mem-ing is one of the highest compliments ever, really. *feels proud* :)