{fic | infinite} vaster than empires still

Oct 30, 2011 05:33

woohyun/sungyeol. pg-13. ~1500 wc.
-"had we but world enough, and time [...] my vegetable love should grow / vaster than empires, and more slow" - andrew marvell.

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midnight musings, elyyyse!, date with the keyboard, sungtroll, (ノ◕‿◕)ノ*:・゚’✿。・:*:❀, feelings and things, inpinitu, wooyeol is otp, woohyunff~, this is not-fic!

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mammothcock October 30 2011, 16:17:39 UTC
OH MY GOD DANA UM WHAT I WHAT IS GOING ON. I. I. again, english is doing that limiting thing again, love cannot be fully expressed, etc etc so on and so forth -- today has been a very bad day. your brain is so tuned to mine it scares me, thank you so much for this.

i'm just going to. read it now. yeah. plans are good.

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mammothcock October 30 2011, 16:55:11 UTC
you probably didn't catch that, but that was the sound of my heart ripping into two. the first half goes: THANKS DANA I'M GOING TO GO TO SLEEP SAD AND MOPEY, TRUST YOU TO WRITE DEPRESSING WOOYEOL EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE PERFECT AND HATE EACH OTHER AND. WHAT. the second half goes: i can't believe you wrote this for me, you are so kind, our relationship involves too much receiving on my part, i think i might die, THE PHRASE 'I LOVE YOU' PALES IN COMPARISON TO MY ACTUAL LOVE FOR YOU ( ... )

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mammothcock October 30 2011, 16:57:11 UTC
frank and his html pal appear to disagree with my comment.

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hyukstache October 30 2011, 18:21:44 UTC
i agree with you and your comment. frank's hard pressed about us not loving him.

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evaa_x3 November 2 2011, 22:46:33 UTC
SQUEEE!

BEFORE I SAY ANYTHING, I WILL SPOT RIGHT HERE AND SQUEAL ABOUT HOW THIS IS WOOYEOL /NEEDS MORE WOOYEOL IN HER LIFE.

(sobs. i'm sorry. i'm awkward. ㅠㅠ)

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evaa_x3 November 2 2011, 23:02:42 UTC
omg. this was so hjkadhjkasldhl ; w ;

my coherency and english are currently failing on me. sob.

b-but omg ; w ; you write gorgeously & i wish i could give you a better comment or post-quote, but it'd end up looking like this

c-can i marry this fic you this piece of gorgeousness? i wouldn't mind it if woohyun and sungyeol were involved either, just saying ; w ; ♥

i should come back once i regain what little sanity i have left. ; w ;

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hyukstache November 3 2011, 18:07:30 UTC
;w; omg. i hope that is a keysmash meaning you liked it, lol! :3

my english fails me all the time ;; no worries. this is a place where judgement doesn't exist! you are more than welcome to fail all you want; i'll fail right alongside you!

sobs, thank you so much! fdsjfk;uoe this comment is perfect as is! doesn't need to change a thing! :3

why yes. but you should ask the "piece of gorgeousness" honestly! it has a mind of its own. i don't think i would either, lol ♥ C:

ad;jfkljfkldjf you're so cute! ♥

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hyukstache November 3 2011, 18:04:41 UTC
EVERYONE NEEDS MORE WOOYEOL IN THEIR LIFE! ADFJKL;EROVCNBX!!! lol.

(no, it's ok. awkward people attract other awkward people. mainly me ;;)

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halcyondusk November 3 2011, 02:00:38 UTC
;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;

Cries um. I love apolcalyptic fic and. Guh. You write so well - your word choices are perfect and the shifting tone between like BAWLS I WANT TO CRY and LUL BANTER are kind of. /incoherent

Lines that stood out to me in particular:

"Not really," Sungyeol said. "You were sensitive, not sentimental."

Wow. WOW. Egads. Five words, I'm dead.

The guilt submerged itself under layers of his skin and peeled away the muscle of his heart. Sungyeol pulled away.

The description is so. Vivid. It's incredible ;_;

"Don't answer that. It doesn't matter," he said to Woohyun. He knew what it meant anyway, and he wasn't going to spend the last day of forever worrying.

Sobs forever what a bittersweet ending.

In short, you're incredible, I swear I'm not a creep, have some hearts ♥♥♥

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hyukstache November 3 2011, 18:11:26 UTC
i love apocalyptic fic as well! i'm glad you think i wrote it well ;; sobs. THOSE ARE GREAT FEELINGS TO SHIFT BACK AND FORTH FROM! the fic plays hockey with your heart. i'm sorry ;w;

asdfjkl; i liked the parts you quoted back. just. thank you so much! ;_; i'm really happy with this fic's turn-out, so i'm glad you liked it! i hope you enjoyed reading as much as i enjoyed writing!

no, i'm not incredible. you are :') thank you! /places hearts in a jar. maybe they light up like fireflies! :3 ♥ tysm again! ♥

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thyluvlyname212 November 3 2011, 23:29:01 UTC
do NOT DELETE THIS. DO NOT. THIS IS AWESOME. AND BADASS AND JUST AWESOME DO NOT DELETE THIS OR I'LL BE AN UPSET READER :( *not that u would care much but still ^_^"*

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hyukstache November 4 2011, 00:11:39 UTC
sobs, omg, thank you! i probably won't delete this, lol. it was a very quick decision to write this and a very fast process of writing it. i would care a lot about what would upset you! :'( i don't like making people sad.

but thank you again for reading! :3

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hyukstache December 24 2011, 07:40:39 UTC
apocalyptic fic is such a genuine interest of mine, idek ♥ i really love it. i am incapable of writing anything remotely happy. ;_; i feel like i should come with a warning or something ;_; thank you so much ♥ you're really too kind.

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