{ fic: "heaven give me say" - part iv }

[hythelia]

Title: Heaven Give Me Say
Chapter: Part IV
Series: Young Justice / Silent Hill
Rating: R (violence, disturbing imagery)
Word Count: 3,932
Summary: In which the Young Justice team traverses the portals of reality and visits a small town called Silent Hill.

Note: Written for the yj_anon_meme . Loosely inspired by this promptFor the purposes of this story, I'm

Comments

[classic_colors]

Loving this. So much. I need more creepy horror fanfiction in my life.

Well, I probably don't, actually, but the point is, I love this.

Wally totally coming to terms with the fact that, okay, he's not going to be with M'gann and that he's also starting to realise that, hey, maybe he's okay with that is adorable and very very cute. Love him. <3

And your writing and your storytelling and your interpretations of how all of these characters are going to react in this setting are all spectacular. Hope the next chapter comes as quick as this one did. Great job. :)

[hythelia]

There's a depressing lack of horror fics out there! Especially when you get into strictly "non-horror" fandoms. But it's my favorite genre to write so I try to work it in no matter what, haha!

Thank you so much for all the feedback! I'm relieved people aren't being turned off by the slight relationship/pairing stuff, I'm not planning to get too focused on it but leaving it out entirely didn't feel right. So I'm glad it's not coming off too out-of-place!

[jayveeka]

Oh holy hell this is so. damn. scary. I love what you've done with the formatting; it really adds to the overall tone of the piece and makes it fifty times creepier! I actually jumped when I scrolled down the page and saw "GOOD DOGS COME WHEN CALLED". ;A; I never thought I'd find fiction scarier than films but I think you have proven that theory wrong!

[hythelia]

Oh gosh, thank you! For a horror writer, hearing that we're effectively creeping out the audience is a huge compliment, so thank you very much! I'm glad the formatting is working out too, I've never really used it before for a fic, but I'm having a lot of fun with it! :D

[monkkeyslutt]

hfkdgjkdhfgkjh Finally leaving a review! I just re-read this, and holy shit. It's amazing. Hythe, you're such a good writer, and you're fucking amazing at /horror/ and this legitimately scares the shit outta me. I can't wait for the next update!!