[exo] take the night

[hyperlydian]

take the night | sehun/kai/chanyeol | r | angst (no, but really), bank robber au“someday,” jongin laughs, and his face is almost skeletal in the glow of the headlights, just like the mask he wears in the banks, and sehun shivers and doesn't know why, "they'll ask how we did it, taking and not caring about what happened afterwards, and we'll tell

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[lunathunderhead]

[sanghyuk scream]

[lunathunderhead]

"im sorry i just made a phone call in chinese in the middle of your fic and i went back and suddenly english was rly pretty" i feel like this sums up everything i feel re: your diction and sentence structure and metaphors but i'm just gonna be gratuitous

the whole time i was reading this it felt like i was trying to catch the next breath before i was even done breathing out the one still in my lungs. like i was running out of time??? time is so strange, age and timelessness are so strange because there are things that live forever and things that??? live for years and die in a single day??? and as i was reading this that feeling of not enough time but all too much time felt so tangible. and! to see! that in the end, sehun has been trapped in time. like a doll. LIKE HE HAS STRIVED SO HARD FOR

insert another sanghyuk scream here

this ot3 was executed so well how do :((( how do forever :(((((( the bank robbery scenes ugh i'm such a sucker for action and bloOD AND SUFFERING. SADOMASOCHISM!!!!!!

ilu annie this was gr8910

[playfulmelodies]

SCREAMS

oh my god?? okay so i clicked this not knowing exactly what to expect tbh and i read the warnings but i foRGOT LIKE HALFWAY THROUGH okay okay so

i really loved everything about them when they were growing up like how sehun and jongin have known each other their entire lives and jongin's mother passing away when he was 10 and how chanyeol comes into their life and how sehun doesn't want to take over his brother and how growing old is so far away but so close

i love everything about beauty being preserved because the person died young both jongin's mother and sehun ;~~; i love lovelove your writing style it is so flowing and nice and just overall so good ;__;

i think i used the word love way too many times but i'm just going to use it again OTL i love this!! <3

[beastlyshine]

oh well that was kind of convenient

[scar13t]

Did you wrte this story thinking about the bank robbing rich kids in that one Jackie chan movie? Jongin and chanyeol do this because of their parents. But what about sehun? Did he just follow them? Or did he want to die young and beautiful. Did they think maybe things would go wrong an they could end up dying or did they just assume they'd live forever and if they get caught their parents would bail them out?
This is really good. I want to read it again and again. <3

[wookcares]

wow! The ot3 was wonderful and my heart goes out to Sehun (╯︵╰,). If parallel universes exist, I hope Sehun is happy in at least one of them. Your have a marvelous way with words, let me love you, author-nim! (´∀｀)♡