Fic: Beloved (Or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History) [Belarus, Lithuania] R [1/3]

[hyperemmalawlz]

Title: Beloved (or, if Nobody Wins, Who Writes History?)
Author: hyperemmalawlz 
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Chapter: 1/3
Characters/Pairing: Lithuania/Belarus (not overly consensually), Belarus/Russia (the same), Ensemble
Word Count: 3790
Rating: R
Summary: It might be forgotten, but Belarus does have a reason to hate

Comments

[sexyhorny]

Oh this was intense. I'd like to read more so I hope you update it.

[papaveri]

Well, you want reviews, you got them! :>

To be honest, I read this some days ago. I hope I can give you a decent comment!

Well, I really liked it. You know, it may sound weird, but it's kind of difficult to find a one-sided Lithuania/Belarus - and I can't see them otherwise.
I liked how you wrote the characters, especially Belarus! Even thought I like Lithuania a lot, the take you gave to their relationship was sure interesting. Interesting and incredibly creepy, I'd say. Your Lithuania manages to be downright scary, and I felt very, very sorry for Belarus. The part with the "beautiful Bela" was probably the most shocking and disgusting (even if I think that that's what you wanted and that's a good thing) part of the whole text.

I'm waiting for the update! This bodes well :)

[vikki]

Wow. I realize I'm really late to reply to this, but I just want you to know: this was incredibly creepy. Lithuania scared the shit out of me. I love the spin you put on Belarus' complete and utter disgust with Lithuania in the present day, the logical line you draw of Lithuania as, basically, a stalker, and combined with his totally-not-innocent history it's really awesome. And creepy.

Ugh. You make me feel bad for liking Lithuania. That's a pretty awesomely intense fic. Great job.