Fic: Tear (Finn/Puck) NC-17

Feb 20, 2011 22:27

Title: Tear
Author: hyperemmalawlz 
Fandom: Glee
Characters/Pairing: Puck/Finn, ensemble. Finn/Quinn, Puck/Quinn, Finn/Rachel, Sam/Quinn, pretty much any canon pairing involving either one of them.
Word Count: 2300
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "He can't help but stare at the look still on Finn's face. He doesn't look depressed or anything, ( Read more... )

finn/puck, ensemble (glee), puck, finn, glee, fanfic

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m3aculpa February 20 2011, 12:11:55 UTC
I once saw this fic rec list that used coffee instead of ratings to determine how dark a fic was. If I was to use that method, this would be an espresso. It's dark and it's bitter; it makes something hurt inside. My breath would catch because of the conflict in Puck's emotions.

Excellent job, as always!

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hyperemmalawlz February 20 2011, 20:31:03 UTC
Nice. Actually, that sounds like a decent way of determining darkness level, as unlike with a rating scale, you don't have to arbitrarily set numbers to dark and light... However, I don't know anything about coffee, so I'd probably get confused. However, for other people, it's a good plan.

Anyway, thank you.

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sunshine_flying February 20 2011, 17:40:41 UTC
Wow, I loved this so much. Seriously. Puck was so insightful and his emotions were spot on.

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hyperemmalawlz February 20 2011, 20:31:15 UTC
Thanks. :)

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ghstmtn February 20 2011, 19:48:44 UTC
well, just... holy fuck. epic, magnificent, best thing i've ever read etc. seriously, this is just too deliciously dark and so well written i had to read it over the entire afternoon just so it'd last longer. girl, i just... can't even right now.

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hyperemmalawlz February 20 2011, 20:31:31 UTC
Heh, nice plan. Thank you.

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farsickness February 20 2011, 20:43:21 UTC
Oooh, perfect. I really like the dynamic you've created between Puck and Finn. It's really interesting. And Puck's voice is perfect here- you've taken the character to the extremes of his bad behavior. It's definitely realistic, though. And very, very hot. In a wrong way. Well done.

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hyperemmalawlz February 20 2011, 20:45:47 UTC
Thank you. :)

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nimenic February 20 2011, 21:04:31 UTC
Delurking here.

Wow, that was so intense. I abosolutely love this fic so dark and yet so wonderful. This is just....wow!

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hyperemmalawlz February 20 2011, 21:07:04 UTC
Thanks. :D

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