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Fic: Girlfriend (Finn/Puck) R (1/2)

Jan 11, 2011 00:38

Title: Girlfriend
Author: hyperemmalawlz
Fandom: Glee
Characters/Pairing: Finn/Puck, ensemble. References to canon pairings, including Finn/Santana, Puck/Santana, Finn/Rachel, etc....
Word Count: 4444
Rating: R
Summary: Established relationship. Finn just wants to make sure Puck won't dump him, or cheat on him. He's hardly the first.
Spoilers: Up to 2x09, "Special ( Read more... )

finn/puck, fic: girlfriend, ensemble (glee), puck, finn, glee, fanfic

Comments 14

chrysler11 January 10 2011, 15:38:31 UTC

Aww poor finn. I like how complicated it was, because yeah Finn enjoyed it and yeah Puck was careful, but when someone isn't ready, they REALLY aren't ready and it's interesting to see that even guys can feel pressured into sex. Finn is just so sensitive and cute. I like the little dragon thing he was talking about. It made sense actually. And I hope in the second part, things can be resolved by Puck showing he cares a lot and coming out with Finn. I think that will help make it easier.

hyperemmalawlz January 11 2011, 00:47:45 UTC

Thank you. I wanted to make the sex not so physically awful for him to sort of emphasize it was the emotions that made it so bad. The dragons... it was a silly metaphor, but it did make sense and I couldn't think of a better one. So there. :P As for what happens in the second part... y'all are gonna have to just wait and see.

anonymous January 10 2011, 16:09:02 UTC

Hey there! An anon lurker here - just wanted to say - great stuff! I'm totally NOT into Finn/Puck but this works really well. Totally believed it. You got Finn's soft-in-the-head-ness absolutely spot on. Re Dubcon. Fear not. The consent issue truly doesn't arise here. Consent is discussed, it is overt, and explicit. Whilst Puck is much more experienced than Finn, He doesn't push or threaten; I like the way you've let Finn do all the dubcon-type stuff to himself. Interesting to see it expressed in this context. If he'd only actually talked it all through with Puck, things might have played out quite differently. And Finn might have enjoyed himself (Would have) much more. You do need to be relaxed and sure of your self and your partner for this to go well the first time. (if I can remember that far back...) although, having said all of that, I didn't find Puck to be all that great as far as breaking in a nervous first-timer he supposedly cares for. Typical overconfident teenage boy actually. I was lucky - my first was much older and ( ... )

Oh my... nekkedking January 10 2011, 23:40:04 UTC

Holy rant... didn't read any of it, but props for the mad ranting skills.

hyperemmalawlz January 11 2011, 00:54:09 UTC

Lol - I did read it all, but I also give you props for your mad ranting skills. I really didn't know where I was going with the warnings, but - well, with all the girls I'm sure have sex before they're ready, I had to warn for something. I am sort of a Mercedes in this situation; I've never been in a scenario where it's come up, but TV (and, y'know, common sense) has taught me that having sex when you're not ready because it'll keep your boyfriend happy is a FUCKING DUMB IDEA. Anyway, thank you. :)

anonymous January 15 2011, 02:22:14 UTC

Thanx for kindness to mad ranters like me. Mebbe I should get an LJ account and call myself madranterboy or something. But yeah - thanx for writing such great stuff. I follow all your stuff. And fabfemmeboy and tessisamess. You are all GODDESSES OF FANFIC ( ... )

shortcrust January 10 2011, 16:59:57 UTC

Really liked your characterisation is this, very spot on. Finny, you poor thing.

hyperemmalawlz January 11 2011, 00:48:07 UTC

Thanks. Agreed, poor Finn.

*g* nekkedking January 10 2011, 23:38:55 UTC

I kind of feel worse for Puck right now because he probably noticed how quickly Finn got outta there at the end, now is probably having doubts about himself and IF he ever does find out Finn didn't want to do it, he'll be crushed because he didn't want Finn to be uncomfortable or not want it. Oh buddy! Now I've worked myself into a sequel-wanting-frenzy! Maybe where Puck is the bottom and it makes Finn feel better. :D Oh or chrysler11 's idea... that sounds adorable.

Re: *g* hyperemmalawlz January 11 2011, 00:50:20 UTC

I'm not sure if Puck noticed or not - well, he probably sort of blinked at it, but isn't thinking about it too hard. Fear not, another part will come! When I... can be bothered. xD Seriously though, thanks. I'll try not to lose my inspiration.

Of course, I'm starting to realize everyone's going to kill me when I post my planned chapter 2 anyway...

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Re: !! hyperemmalawlz January 11 2011, 01:17:05 UTC

Thanks.