Fic: The Right to Remain Silent (Rachel, Santana) R

[hyperemmalawlz]

Title: The Right to Remain Silent
Author: hyperemmalawlz 
Fandom: Glee
Characters/Pairing: Rachel, Santana. Talk of Finn/Rachel, Puck/Rachel, Finn/Santana, and Puck/Santana.
Word Count: 4280
Rating: R
Summary: Finn sleeping with Santana means he's responsible for what Santana did. And Rachel can't cope with that.
Spoilers: Up to 2x09, "Special Education."
Warnings:

Comments

[shadowcree]

Wow. That was.... I don't even know.

I read every word.

Wow.........

[shadowcree]

I reread that and well it sounded like I didn't like it but I did it was awesome.

[hyperemmalawlz]

Heh. Thanks. (I just got some douchebag on FFN telling me I'm a sick person and need professional help for writing this, so thanks for reassuring me.)

[shadowcree]

No problem. Things can be taken wrong on the web so I thought I would just make myself clear. Don't give the jackass a second thought.

[shadowedkit]

Holy shit.

-blinks-

I actually don't know what to say (other than TOTALLY planning to make sure I'm the one tagging this prompt to reread it again) but really nice work on characterisation and just the whole... story. I ended up feeling fearful of Santana towards the end of the assault myself. Nice work on the detail as well.

What I also liked is how Rachel perceived it and you allowed the physical assault to be pyschological as well, with the reflective and philosphical thought (Just do what I do, say no. Does Santana know no?) which seemed most appropriate for Rachel whom, by making assumption with knowing of rights, she'll be reasonably educated on assault etc.

I really liked how you tied it into the episode so beautifully and adds a different spin to her making out with Puck--more than a simple jealousy/revenge thing.

-face palm- Sorry for the long comment! Just wanted to say this was awesome.

[hyperemmalawlz]

Heh. Thanks. Rachel's and Santana's perspectives on the whole thing are... different < /understatement>

Long comments make my day! Sorry it took me so long to reply. Again, thank you. :)

[antigoneblack]

Once again, what you write is incredible. Great work, I loved it. I thought that it was perfect on characterization and totally believable.

[hyperemmalawlz]

Thanks. :) Keeping people in character when writing something like this is terrifying, so I'm glad it worked.

[hyperemmalawlz]

Thank you. :D