Fic for the entire community!

[zoesque]

Title: Disney and Novels and Bears! Oh, My!
Recipient: The entire community!
Pairing/Characters: None. Gen
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Rude language, but other than that, no.
Disclaimer: I don't own them ):
Summary: The Hyoutei regulars go on a team-bonding trip.
Notes: Thank you to K and K for the poking and hand holding. You two are absolute stars.

Comments

[medieval128]

a;woefji This is fantastic. *__* I adored the characterisation obsessively and endlessly because Shishido's right--Atobe's a dick. But in a squishable, lovable way. And speaking of, Shishido was so boyish in this and the way I wish he was written all the time. I thought you did really well with all the characters, but Atobe and Shishido (and maybe Oshitari, too) stood out most to me.

Also, I adored the style of this fic because it helped to make the it all the more fun what with the snappy dialogue and quick scenes.

Thank you so much for writing! :)

[bunnysquee]

OMW! this was hilarious! i thoroughly enjoyed the camaraderie and bickering; you portrayed teenage boys wonderfully!

Atobe is almost certain that Oshitari had just run off screaming to feed the drama started by the rest of his teammates.

*crying with laughter* that's so perfect.

another of my favourite bits is:

"We have to go back," Oshitari says. "We have to go and save them."

"No," Atobe says, folding his arms across his chest. "No way in fucking hell."

and what is the next scene?

"I can't believe it," Atobe says ... "I can't believe I'm out here, searching for a romance novel."

WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!! *rolls on floor*

a fun read - thank you for writing.

[thesundaywriter]

I really loved reading this. The characterization and dialogue were great! I particularly love the way you wrote Atobe and how he resigned himself to pulling straws and whatnot for the sake of team bonding XD I was laughing at how Shishido still ended up sleeping by the door and the idea of Oshitari pretending to be scared of the 'bear' to add to the drama. It sounds like something he'd do haha. The bantering between Gakuto and Shishido was funny too~

[tifarette]

This was amazing! Hyoutei are such easily annoyed boys and you just have to love them for it!

Gakuto follows suit, leaving his shoes in a heap next to Shishido's. "Do you have to swear all the fucking time? I mean, it's rude."
Oh GAKUTO. <3

Making a running joke out of Shishido and Disney, and wanting to marry Choutarou for cake, and naughty sparklers, and, and Oshitari's running away just to egg them on... <3 So fantastic!

[uminohikari]

*giggles* I adore your dialogue and the interaction between the characters ^.~

(This is also the first fic that I think I know the author for.. >>)