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Musings On A Moonlit Night

Nov 14, 2011 19:41

Title: Musings On A Moonlit Night
Author: Ragna (afteriwake)
Pairing: Byakuya/Yoruichi
Rating: PG
Spoilers (if applicable): Set during the time skip, nearer to when Byakuya returns to the world of the living.
Warnings (if applicable): None
Summary: In solitude and in quiet and in escape, she thought, and while lost in her thoughts she was caught.
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series - both here and there, character - yoruichi, character - byakuya, admin - fulfilled request, pairing - byakuya/yoruichi, !author - afteriwake

Comments 5

unwritten_icons November 15 2011, 05:57:50 UTC

I very much enjoyed this! I liked the subtle mood a lot. Your dialogue was great and the character interactions were perfect. I liked how she let him keep the ribbon. I feel for Yoruichi in this, to feel like she'll never "live up" to his first love, and deciding to wait for it instead. Thanks so muich, this was lovely :) I'll be sure to think of a good prompt for the next one. Thanks!

afteriwake November 15 2011, 19:13:33 UTC

Yay! I was really hoping you'd like it because I wasn't sure if I'd gotten the mood right. And go ahead and leave the prompt as a reply to this or drop it over at my prompt post. Either works.

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afteriwake November 18 2011, 18:57:26 UTC

I have a few more prompts for this pairing (and unwritten_icons still owes me one since I used two for this one) so definitely look forward to more of them.

vince_moon December 2 2011, 20:11:41 UTC

This is amazing. The description of the night, the trees, the wind, it's so moving.

afteriwake December 2 2011, 21:59:37 UTC

Thank you so much!