Comments | hyouhakuzai_fic: Moonlit Savior | Self Appointed Protector | Black Lace

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Moonlit Savior | Self Appointed Protector | Black Lace | Shattered

Aug 17, 2011 21:42

Title: Moonlit Savior
Author: Ragna (afteriwake)
Pairing: Ishida & Nemu
Rating: PG
Spoilers (if applicable): No spoilers.
Warnings (if applicable): None.
Summary: She's his rescuer, framed in moonlight.
Authors Notes: For darkmagic_luvr, who wanted Ishida/Nemu and the prompt “moonlight.” Sorry if it's not shippy enough.

( Moonlit Savior )

character - keigo, character - ishida, character - aizen, pairing - ishida/orihime, character - nemu, !author - afteriwake, character - orihime, pairing - keigo/tatsuki, character - hinamori, admin - fulfilled request, character - tatsuki

Comments 12

tasteslikemiso August 18 2011, 05:03:59 UTC

Oh, these were nice. I picked my favorite bits out, these lines were beautiful. Your Ishida is perfect. ♥

"Her face was expressionless, as it always was and always would be, and she said nothing."

"The next day she asked him to walk home with her. He said yes. And so they left school, shoulders touching, her talking and him listening, and he knew that was the way it should have always been."

And you wrote the Aizen/Hina just the way I like it, beautiful and tragically one-sided. The line "she loved him, oh, how she loved him" hit me like a ton of bricks in the best possible way, I love fic that shreds my heart. These were all lovely, but I can't help liking mine the best! Thank you so much for taking my request!

afteriwake August 18 2011, 05:08:46 UTC

Yay! I'm really glad you liked yours. I love writing wounded!Hinamori more than smug!Aizen.

an_ardent_rain August 18 2011, 05:43:54 UTC

That Hinamori fic was gorgeous. Oh my goooooosh, so good, I can't even. I am depressed!seal clapping now. I really like Hinamori, so I don't enjoy seeing her hurt but I love, love, love reading fics like this, about her feelings on Aizen, because they're so deep and complicated and rising above it? Yes yes yes.

And the last bit? Now, she's strong again. That was just, like the perfect line. I loved the ending.

(Also, I loved the Ishida/Orihime ficlet too. Ugh ugh ugh I adore them. And the ending for that one, too! Their shoulders just touching and just mmmm.)

Really lovely work!

afteriwake August 19 2011, 00:43:48 UTC

Oh, I'm really glad you liked the Hinamori one. Usually I write her healed and happy and whole, so this was a departure. And I love the Ishida/Orihime one, too.

unwritten_icons August 18 2011, 07:45:22 UTC

My favorite one is "protector" - Protective!Ishida is WIN. Of course the others were fantastic, as always, but that one stood out to me. I love how you write. You make the characters realistic and endearing.

afteriwake August 19 2011, 00:44:23 UTC

Aww, thank you, sweetie!

loverofstories August 24 2011, 19:59:15 UTC

Aw, I loved the IshiHime fic. C:

afteriwake August 24 2011, 20:28:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.

kanjo_girl October 16 2011, 17:59:55 UTC

LOL, fake x-ray glasses are match makers, I knew it. I loved it. Keigo is such a dork.

afteriwake October 16 2011, 21:25:54 UTC

First off! ::GLOMP:: I MISSED YOU! Secondly, I thought that would be the case, too. I'm glad you liked it!

kanjo_girl October 17 2011, 13:53:28 UTC

I MISSED YOU TOO. Like, this place "A" School or whatever, after boot camp sucks the LIFE out of people. Honestly, everyone here is depressed and we all just need some happy pills. I missed you so much. I need to start reading fan fiction and writing it.

afteriwake October 17 2011, 18:43:53 UTC

Yeah, my friend Linda went through the same thing, but she's been in for a while and it seems to get easier. I've been writing more than what I've linked you to, and we have some other posters here now, so feel free to browse and enjoy!