Tomorrow

[hyeongsoap]

Title: Tomorrow
Pairing: Jonghyun/Kibum (main), past Jinki/Kibum
Rating: R
Warnings: the story is not narrated in chronological order; character death, cw: attempt of suicide (not main characters); cw: car accident (mention);
Final Word Count: 10573
A/N: SBB2014's entry

Comments

[bittybabo]

SPOT BECAUSE SLEEP FOR SCHOOL

[bittybabo]

Omggggg honey that was pretty good!
Ive discovered a few grammar mistakes here and there, but theyre not that glaring, Im a linguistics major, thats why, so im pretty anal about it.
Fighting!

[hyeongsoap]

Ahhh, thank you so much? For everything <3 and yeah I am aware that there are probably a few mistakes. (I guess it is mainly because it was a SBB entry and I exclusively didn't want any of my friends to beta it/give opinion (all to keep a secret from them). I know it is kind of silly but anyway). I am relieved that they are not that glaring, especially if you are a linguistic major. I can kind of relate to this feeling, heh. Oh, and when I get some time make sure they get discovered and eliminated heh.

Thank you so so much <3

[hyeongsoap]

OH I hope you didn't cry too much *hands you tissues (nothing is written on them I promise).

And thank you so much for your feedback I really appreciate it <3 (woah and about future works: I'll try to live up to your expectations, heh)

[quagmireisadora]

I'm fucking late but man I had to say this--this story is like the whorls of a flower and it withers down to the end so gracefully. Because you look at a dying flower and you know it's sad, but you're also pulled in by how beautiful the whole process is. You can't help but sit and watch as each petal, each leaf dries and slowly falls off. You don't want to save it with drops of water, you don't want to mourn its end but you remember each second like a photograph and it becomes a part of your existence. It starts to define pieces of you. For a time at least.

Fuck.

Brilliant story. **reads it thirty times more**

[hyeongsoap]

I'm sorry love I still couldn't bring myself to reply to this because it is ... like. It's a summary to it (a summary I never bothered to do/forgot to do) and wow. A dying flower. Wow. If I could I'd pin this @top of my inbox to get to it everytime and get reminded this was written for my story and me from you. It's like. I don't know. My reply is kind of lame but yes. The reason I'm saying "YES I'VE SEEN YOUR COMMENT" a month too late is because I selfishly read it over and over again and smiled.

[quagmireisadora]

<3